East Miles vrs... verbal violence
 

yo 15-20 lines 20maxed
u spit first
5 votes=wins
no hater crew d/r votes
verse due in 1 hour
good luck~one~

lets go then mafucka......................................

Okay check 1 2

Listen....Kidd Look

Okay I got this man poeticly


Off the top is where I spitt it....real lyrical shit, that gripps your mine like columbain "Bricks"<----- (cocaine).... { try and keep up} So yeah man I know you checked my record....Yeah thats me 0-4.....But I'm about to count this win as 5, which means my record is 5-4 filp it around that shit spells 4/5th..... which I spit constent untill you have a huge whole ripped through the left side of your fragile hipp.....(pause) Cause Miles is that sick.....Listen..... Verbal Violence your words are more like noise pollution.....but I have the solution.....Spit a thousand lyrical daggers at your brain for verbal execution :laugh2: ....... I gave you a taste of nice rymes, so eat your meal....your from colorado give bullets to you.... lyrical not real...... at your school like that columbine Littleton Deal.....Okay Okay those words were harsh....but smart....If it offends your heart stabbing you like a million darts.....It'll be a personal tragedy when they find your body on the trian tracks dumped inside a shopping cart....East kidd talk so vicous....Yeah Me you cant be "slaying" I'm sick go through you house and start "OJing".....Cause you can't judge if I'm weak, can't say that I'm not street, can't judge me by whut the fuck I wear on my feet.....Cause I'm original Like all the other mafucka's you see..... :cussing:

Bitch!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! Man No bullshit just bizness :thumbup:

aight ayo
yo he claim of the top he spit,but we all know its his best prewrittin shit//ima crazy doo when it come to murkin scripts//plottin blanks with my spit in the hollow tip//ima morphical rhyme that changes when east miles chimes//gives me a sence that he aint write none his lines//ima mental mind hypnotized crime its my killa instinct tellin me the win is mine//o-4 to 10-10 this aint a battle on whos weak and who best//this is a battle on whos better theres the door have a rest//as i unload my semiouta spit into ya membrain through ya chest//better walk around like 50 and rep that vest(bullet prrof)//im known to make straight emcees go insest only u would say its the best//
leave him to steady rest im da judge//im slangin yayo miles east to feed his big mommas needs bitch has kankles that look like her knees//shes has a clit that looks like her bellyyy!!!//come get served by this deadly beast cuz im a deadly fiend//i come clear when im speakin if u sew than u must reep//

i think i went over but ohh well lets just say we had infinite lines ya but anywayz im out yall could be uppin them votes now~one~

could we be uppin them votes?>....................

this nigga I can't belive it he thinks it prewritten I can't believe it .....son I type supa slow thats why it took me so long err thang I said was off the top so if you doubt my skillz like that You can have this fucken battle I'll actually go around and tell people to vote for you

http://community.rapbattles.com/showthread.php?t=132754

Vote the weak mafucka on my thread because He think I prewrite so fuck it I wanna let him have it so please vote and give him a pussy win....

Ayo I'll hit ya'll with a honest vote if you do this...=(

i don't think east pre-writ shit...i think verbal just thinkz he kan't win so he had to make sum bogus shit up....an the battle was overall aight.....east came out stronga an had betta flow an sum good punches so i'ma give this to him......

vote=East Miles

East came with the heat in every line. His rhymes were creative. Verbal's verse was just plain weak. No originality whatsoever.

vote - East Miles

Okay uppin for reason folks I want this closed vote towards his way.....don't mattter just vote this shit can close

wow this battle was messy

east miles..your shit was pretty nice
good punches..they were hittin pretty hard 7/20
your personals were bangin i was feelin them fo sho 7.5/10
your structure was UGLY 5/10
but you had a good flow to back it up 6/10
some good meta's 7/10
saw some good multi's..hittin hard 7.5/10

verbal violence...your shit was horrid
i wasnt feelin your punches 5/10
your structure was bad too 4/10
your flow was wack aswell 3/10
your personals were not hittin at all 5/10
didnt see any multi's 0/10
some ok meta's 4/10

i aint gon poll vote this until u drop a Honest Explained vote in this battle http://community.rapbattles.com/showthread.php?t=132816

east miles came to battle in this one ,verbal u werent throwin good punches and your structure was iffy.................miles you had sum good hits in but i also lost you in yo structure a few times......................no hatin here just honest vote....
i need sum honest votes plse i voted on yall shit hit me bak
http://community.rapbattles.com/showthread.php?t=130850

yo
pnuches, vocab, metaphors, and all the rest go to east he came strong and did a crazy ass verse......man your record would be perfect if you up your structure
each line should be liek this
blah blah blah blah...
blah blah blah blha...
knaw men?

vv: weak thats the first word that popped in my creative & very intellectual
mind......the punches wow not hard at all..............flow was one of the
worst i've ever seen on the history of this site....... originality was the worst
part of this and to me that is a pretty big category after punches & flow
vocab was lacking peeps.....

East Miles: nice was the first word that came to my very articulate & intelligent mind.... the punches brought heat to the battle the second you
dropped.... flow was really nice....... vocab overlooked vv's drop nice job
originality was there not the greatest but it was there.....................


vote:east miles good job!