Triple_N's Versility is Shown Here!!
 

Yo I got 4 tracks so far, an I would appreciate some feedback on them. OH an could you vote it hot or flop I'd appreciate that. So, just peep them an holla back!!!

http://www.soundclick.com/bands/8/triplenmusic.htm

aight...i peeped em.....

the SHAWTIE track....it do sound like a club banger type joint...for some reason though,i hear a lot of static....but its aight...not a bad track

the MURDER YOU track....u are off beat in some parts...like u out runnin the beat n stuff...but,u got a good voice for spittin...n u actually sound like u're flowin,not talkin like some other ppl.....

BABY GIRL track....i like the beat....i remember peepin this before awhile back...but ur flow got better since..its better in the shawtie and the murder u tracks....u sound more enthusiastic in those.....but,u are a creative dude,i like how u goin back n forth like the chick n u talkin

DONT FUCK IT US track..um...ur boy at the beginning..he is just straight wack...his shout outs at the beginnin were the best part of his verse lol.....wasnt feelin this is much as the other tracks....but,this prolly was ur first audio....so it wasnt too bad...u seem to be gettin better with each track though...like u gettin more confortable...good shit man...i think u'll get better holla....

Once again, out of respect for my nigga Triple, I will give feedback on Shawtie. But, I have utter disdain and personal dislike for Spul.

Regardless, I liked the energy of Shawtie. It is a club joint as stated by LK. However, I was not feeling your monotone pitch throughout the track. Your flow, however, is very good here. You rode the beat well.

Lyrically, it was adequate. But, what makes club joints just that is a hot hook. The hook here is good at best. So, I don't see this unseating Jay Z anytime soon. But, it is a good song worth listening to.


7/10

Good Job my nigga.

^lol ok, man, don't kno why you hate me but whatever. lol

Yea, tight shit. Triple. :thumbup:

yall got some real shit on dat page dogs, keep it up

review
 

I gave some of your stuff a listen..

"IF LOVING YOU" - Your voice sounds 50 cent meets Scarface. This is probably my favorite song out of the bunch, cuz your writting on a real situation. Beat is nice too.

"Shawtie" - I'm not a big fan of current mainstream style songs, so I can't say much on this one, except I've heard it done about 800 times before.

"I'll Murder You" - The one dude who said your off-beat on this song. You are just a tad, but the chorus more than well makes up for it. It reminds me of some Three 6 Mafia type shit. The chorus on this one is niiiice.

Off Ur loving U track.

It was straight, Ur voice is a lil to ruff, but U flow was ill though. I heard the real beat to this one befor thoagh, Its by a group called Tha Mexicanz, but U ripped it. I barely could make out wat U was saying sometimes though but it was kewl though. 6 - 10

Shawtie,
my boys got me into underground club hits but I still aint down wit it too much though. If the quality in Ur vocals was a lil sharper Ud be alot better. The hook was kinda nasty though. It sounds like Timberland meet Spuls basement. the beat was okay but it got too crazy in the hook. 5 - 10

I'll murder U,
Intro sounds crazy, its ill. sounds like some star wars shit. U should let the beat play out a bit. Ur flow was good but it goes off a lil. I think this one is ur hardest one so far. Ur second verse is lacking the energy from the first. the hook needs something. Its too simple till U get to the gun part. 9 - 10

Baby Gurl,
not to happy wit the name, reminds me of Fabolouse. Im on the intro now and so far the beat is sick. U still could'nt let the beat ride out. Ur flow wasent as good but Ur story was kinda ill if U listen to it. nice work. But the second verse again seems to drop the ball. still a good song. U also a lil stook on marrage, I kant stand why dudes is fixed on it. U should've suggested she'd be Ur girl rather than wife. still good thoagh. 7 - 10

dont fuck wit Us,
I also heard this beat befor, Ur boy is garbage. Im currently waiting for his verse to end just to listen to Ur verse, I see why U specifficly distinguished who is who, cuz I wouldnt wanna be him either. Ur flow isnt too good but it wasnt Ur fault. the beat sucked. U did wat U could wit wat U had. I bet Ur boy wrote the hook to. Keep em out the studio and U'll be getting paid in no time kid. 3 - 10
U got potentio
no beef. keep it real.

Thanks y'all for all the feedback, I appreciate that especially since most of it is positive