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sex collab
me n triple_n did this in less than 5 mins
i want a thug some1 2 give it 2 me rough wen its time 2 fuck could beat the pussy ^ put me in cuffs spank me n pull my hair ill proudly let these screams fill the air this loves a flair its hours till we give it ^ i just want the sex i dont need the love ma im the thug u need i could tell at 1st glance i knew u were the 1 by the tingle in my pants i wont b the man 2 show u the wedding rings but i damn well sure can show u big things ima bang that ass out all muthafuckin night im known 4 lossenin ^ pussies that r tight |
no offence will...but parts of ur verse.....didnt rhyme well at all.
i want a thug some1 2 give it 2 me rough wen its time 2 fuck could beat the pussy ^ this loves a flair its hours till we give it ^ i just want the sex i dont need the love vocab from both was simplistic, very short. Erm I werent feeling this at all. |
^ ^^^<< That means Up ahah Nice Drop Will A peer hit Me Up 4 Tha Remix...Ill Show U wass Upp..
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LOOOOOOOOOL^^^^^^^^^^^
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it was not dat good but if u keep workin hard at it may b take sum time off diz site & practice in a few years u should b ready 2 cum bacc hard u know
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fuck u new b u leave the site it was a freestyle and it does flow dumbass
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nice shit will a peer. it flowed nicely. stay up. pc
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yo uppin this leave a link and ill leave some feedback
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iight that was somepretty tight shyt will a peer ...it had some nice flow...the vocab was alittle simple...good imagery..and nice Rhythem ..except for parts of your verse the didnt rhyme very well ..overal nice drop
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damnit everything flowed lol aiight il peep ur om
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uppin this hoe b4 i leave
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yea this shit was pretty tight ma pc
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freaky deaky but yall could of came up wit better vocabs.
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will a peer i kno u got skills and all but i think this needed a little work nice drop though..................
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Are you FORREAL?
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You all REALLY took 5 minutes to write this? And you are proud of taking five minutes to write this? In 5 minutes, you should have something atleast twice this length and 10 times its quality. (Just my opinon, but maybe is has something to do with all the curse words/porn talk.) |
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