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Willa 07-02-04 03:11 AM

sex collab
 
me n triple_n did this in less than 5 mins



i want a thug some1 2 give it 2 me rough
wen its time 2 fuck could beat the pussy ^
put me in cuffs spank me n pull my hair
ill proudly let these screams fill the air
this loves a flair its hours till we give it ^
i just want the sex i dont need the love


ma im the thug u need i could tell at 1st glance
i knew u were the 1 by the tingle in my pants
i wont b the man 2 show u the wedding rings
but i damn well sure can show u big things
ima bang that ass out all muthafuckin night
im known 4 lossenin ^ pussies that r tight

Poppa Kap 07-02-04 04:47 PM

no offence will...but parts of ur verse.....didnt rhyme well at all.

i want a thug some1 2 give it 2 me rough
wen its time 2 fuck could beat the pussy ^

this loves a flair its hours till we give it ^
i just want the sex i dont need the love

vocab from both was simplistic, very short. Erm I werent feeling this at all.

PoLiFicK 07-02-04 04:52 PM

^ ^^^<< That means Up ahah Nice Drop Will A peer hit Me Up 4 Tha Remix...Ill Show U wass Upp..

DeLeon 07-02-04 04:59 PM

LOOOOOOOOOL^^^^^^^^^^^

ok drop

lil_ridah65 07-02-04 07:24 PM

it was not dat good but if u keep workin hard at it may b take sum time off diz site & practice in a few years u should b ready 2 cum bacc hard u know

Willa 07-02-04 08:59 PM

fuck u new b u leave the site it was a freestyle and it does flow dumbass

Country 07-02-04 09:24 PM

nice shit will a peer. it flowed nicely. stay up. pc

Willa 07-03-04 12:43 AM

yo uppin this leave a link and ill leave some feedback

God 07-03-04 12:50 AM

iight that was somepretty tight shyt will a peer ...it had some nice flow...the vocab was alittle simple...good imagery..and nice Rhythem ..except for parts of your verse the didnt rhyme very well ..overal nice drop

please leave some feed on the open mic in my sig

Willa 07-03-04 01:54 AM

damnit everything flowed lol aiight il peep ur om

Willa 07-04-04 12:18 AM

uppin this hoe b4 i leave

Introspect. 07-04-04 05:25 AM

yea this shit was pretty tight ma pc

Barsofheat 07-04-04 03:13 PM

freaky deaky but yall could of came up wit better vocabs.

Soul Sickness 07-05-04 01:39 AM

will a peer i kno u got skills and all but i think this needed a little work nice drop though..................

Ms.Skillz4daze 08-24-04 05:48 PM

Are you FORREAL?
 
Quote:
Originally Posted by will a peer
me n triple_n did this in less than 5 mins



i want a thug some1 2 give it 2 me rough
wen its time 2 fuck could beat the pussy ^
put me in cuffs spank me n pull my hair
ill proudly let these screams fill the air
this loves a flair its hours till we give it ^
i just want the sex i dont need the love


ma im the thug u need i could tell at 1st glance
i knew u were the 1 by the tingle in my pants
i wont b the man 2 show u the wedding rings
but i damn well sure can show u big things
ima bang that ass out all muthafuckin night
im known 4 lossenin ^ pussies that r tight



You all REALLY took 5 minutes to write this? And you are proud of taking five minutes to write this? In 5 minutes, you should have something atleast twice this length and 10 times its quality. (Just my opinon, but maybe is has something to do with all the curse words/porn talk.)


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