I did what you said and elivated
 

:shoot: Listen to this.......
Like drinkin piss in a cup i'll have you delerous/
Ima murder dis cat cause it got a little curious/
Furious like Dexter when Dee-Dee mess up his work./
but if a nigga do dat to mine he's gonna get hurt.
gonna get merked if he keep playin games, even at church./
Like birds tryin to find there nest your gonna get purched./
All your rhyms are wack./
Cause i'll clown you like i was doin a stand up act wit Bernie Man./
When its time to rap ya'll niggas are a bunch of looseres./
But at the end i'll have you seated right next to Bu-Da./


welllllllll..... :help: :banghead:

it was pretty tight. I understood your rhymes cuz they're from tv. keep doin your thing!

hmmmmm...................ur a lil betta ya can be in fi ya battle and merk someon.....

u'll find ur best battle rhymes when u don't try so hard 2 make it work but keep workin at it