illiance Vs Datruth29
 

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I rip emcees at sick degrees your quick to freeze,
Literally "de-feat" you as my wit can split your knees,
Your too thick to read-that's Da Truth-so stop boasting,
Your punches are easily dodged like you rhyme in slowmotion,
I'm bruisin foes, abusing hoes an now this loser knows,
The only way he'll win is trhough dickriding and crew votes,
It's jus' stupid bro-how can you think to fight this?
When your rhyme scheme's as wobbly as a one legged cyclist?
Despite this I'm readily relaxed an I'll walk steadily past,
Cos you can't spit at me with your own head in your ass.

Peeze.

I'm so agressive on mics I make Manikins Blink n Flinch/
while this hypochadriac only Thinks he's SIck/
thinkin that he flows like water, yet he sinks in shit/
either way man, I attack the way a Tiger should/
yo ass wouldn't even be "up to par" if you were Tiger Woods/
you know that I am good, I stand tall like Goliath stood/
I'm more than 100 steps ahead of you.......with a Giant foot/
I'm Spittin Heat at you to "roast" you like any Enimies/
it's like yo saliva's made from Liquid Nitro, you never Spit The "Heat"/
I have a tendency to blow bitch MC's up to Smitherines/
My Punchlines didn't just punch you.. they threw everything at you..
even the Kitchen sink/.....


peace................

You're late mate - you read my verse and realised you need more time? hehe playin man, just drop soon.

Peeze

My bad, nice verse - we musta posted that last one at the same time.

Let the voting begin.

uppin fa votes

uppin again.....

Uppin B

up .......

vote-datruth

illiance the only thing you had was the one legged cyclist lines...which was only decent, but on the bright side, your flow was good

truth, your opener was good, the tiger woods line is played...but other than that the giant line was decent...flow was on point...except the closer..

so truth gets the vote

Ok, OK, uppin

LMAO!

Datruth-

This was some funny shit:
I have a tendency to blow bitch MC's up to Smitherines/
My Punchlines didn't just punch you.. they threw everything at you..
even the Kitchen sink/.....

The hard shit that make one goes, "DAAAAAAMN!":
I'm so agressive on mics I make Manikins Blink n Flinch/
***Points for originality, never seen that shit before

illiance-

This was some funny shit:
Your too thick to read-that's Da Truth-so stop boasting,
Your punches are easily dodged like you rhyme in slowmotion,
***Also, a "DAAAAMN!" rhyming in slowmotion, lol...

This was a pretty good battle, but my vote has to go to Datruth because Ill came up with the same "this truth is" shit.

fasho, fasho.. uppin............................................. .

This was a pretty good battle, at first when i started reading illiance's verse, I was like man this is pretty syck. He came with a very nice flow, and good structure, had tons of multis I was feelin it. The punches he threw tho wasnt really on que, i did like the one leg cyclist that was creative. I just didnt feel the punches hit that hard.

Datruth Your opening line was hard, talking about him being a hypochandriac, syck. Your flow and structure was also on point, The giant stood and giant foot rhyme was also pretty syck. I think your punches were hittin a lot harder. I would like to see more multis from you though, it would make your flow sound even more syck.

Overall i just thought datruth had a few harder punches.

v/datruth

Illiance
I rip emcees at sick degrees your quick to freeze,
Literally "de-feat" you as my wit can split your knees,
d-feat....really played out. 3/10
Your too thick to read-that's Da Truth-so stop boasting,
Your punches are easily dodged like you rhyme in slowmotion,
personal...so-so metiphore. 3/10
I'm bruisin foes, abusing hoes an now this loser knows,
The only way he'll win is trhough dickriding and crew votes,
pretty good. simple but nice. 5/10
It's jus' stupid bro-how can you think to fight this?
When your rhyme scheme's as wobbly as a one legged cyclist?
creative at anything. 5/10
Despite this I'm readily relaxed an I'll walk steadily past,
Cos you can't spit at me with your own head in your ass.
your sayin your closer to his ass than ne thing. 1/10
You kinda kill'd yourself with that closer there. But otherwise. Your flow was nice. Work on some harder punches tho. Good job.
17/50

Datruth
I'm so agressive on mics I make Manikins Blink n Flinch/
while this hypochadriac only Thinks he's SIck/
i thought hypochadriac's....always thought they were SICK? 6/10
thinkin that he flows like water, yet he sinks in shit/
either way man, I attack the way a Tiger should/
yo ass wouldn't even be "up to par" if you were Tiger Woods/
Tiger's usually sub-par....woulda been a better punch that way. 5/10
you know that I am good, I stand tall like Goliath stood/
I'm more than 100 steps ahead of you.......with a Giant foot/
no. 3/10
I'm Spittin Heat at you to "roast" you like any Enimies/
it's like yo saliva's made from Liquid Nitro, you never Spit The "Heat"/
didnt really flo 3/10
I have a tendency to blow bitch MC's up to Smitherines/
My Punchlines didn't just punch you.. they threw everything at you..
even the Kitchen sink/.....
Blah closer 3/10
You definitly had the best line in the battle. You seemed pretty witty wit your punches. You oughta just work on your flo a bit. It threw me off at some times. Nice Work.
20/50

Vote/DaTruth