-bODy COunt- vs. Durmil
 

Whatever nigga, you know the rules im checkin in and spittin
Im bound to be shittin, on you wit my verse you gone be smittin
Never be hittin, A soul wit the punches you omittin
Challengin me, or acceptin my call you're better off jus quittin
I'll win this poll like an election, And sever yo connection wit perfection
And dis member yo head from the upper section, for my collection
Comin at me wit pussy shit, wit a name like Durmil
Niggas sleep on yo battles like you been spittin sleepin pills
I got 25 net wins, oh yea on what site, Cuz in the light
That i shine you get ko'ed like tyson fights, day or night
Hurry up and post, so i can go to work and snatch yo mamas purse
Gettin in my ring you're dyin seven days after you post your verse
Or keep rehearsin, for you slaughterin in public, i done this
To whatever you post, i already won this, jus dub this
To yo favorites list on yo computer, like a looter
you dont have to steal, I come be yo personal tutor
If you ask me nicely, better sooner than later
Cuz i seperate boys from elevateds like equater,
change of stater, Like a happy pill or a depressant,
Cuz you'll be addicted to me, after i finish my lesson

THe only nigga to drop a verse jus to set up the battle...

HAHA k You "light" in "weight", clearly all ya spittin was baby lines/ (hes a light weight)
Durmil bout to make ya mom regret May 11th of eighty five// (his birthday)
Cuz I pull a mic out ya anus-straight through ya palm/
I aint calm, you can download me killin him on rotten.com//
I spit curses, ill "put you to sleep" by "recitin' one of your own verses"/
Its gon get worse, you "caught my fire" like "satan worshipers"//
Don't ever rush into a battle, u sprung for cocks so disregard the chicks/
Only time u spitin fire is when you mix hot sauce wit cum from suckin' dicks//
Put knives in ya face, kill ya quicka than the text you waste/
Ya gay, keep ya career where the bullet is, below ya ''waist"//*
I attack-cats, thinkin I "punched behind you" the way i "gashed-back"/
Bc's verse be like a "thong", "one flimsy line" and the rest "half-assed"//
You should jet, when my punches unleash I'll dismount ya breath/
Already taken away ya W(win) now you only got 25 letters in ya alphabet//
Where ya law low? Frisco? well lets go, pussy u can catch me at Fresh Co./
Shoulda been a no show, Ya loss came "surprising" like the "Joe Schmo Show"//
Dont mess with, Im raps 'Frank Sinatra' call me a classic/
Next Time ill "bounce you areond" Like a fuckin "elastic"/

Lines 19-20.....God Your Dead
BC's vision a blurr, bitch soft like fur and Durmil aim to rup-ture/
Pump more metal(bullets) through ya body then wolverine's stuc-ture//
(wolverine's his avatar.....omg thats sick)

*meaning his dick is the size of a bullet
dont understand any other wordplay or punches or w/e dont vote

lets get some votes on this.....

drop a thread or w/e and ill hit up ya battle wit an honest vote

uppin this

lookin for some votes on this......

does nobody on this board vote????

i thought battles would get done quick since theres so many emces but shit...

up up up up

drop a thread and we'll drop votes

this is bullshit to not have a single vote for real

vote...drop a link

theres more then one metaphor in my verse for the illiturate such as lyricalflowz....but hey thanx for votin homie

ight 1-0 uppin for sum more votes on this....

aight.. i think durmil won this..

Durmil:he had personals out the ass lmao.. nice lil flow.. over rpetty nice drop..

body:yous tarted off slow, and your opener didnt have a punch,, bad move bruh.. always have a punch in your opener.. its like a rule or you lose.. lol..over it was a decent drop, tho durrmil got you on this one..

v/Durmil - (this is a honest vote, cause durmil voted against me in one of my batter, beotch :p lol.. jk)
no hate to you body count.. just work on putting a lil more punch into you verse, then you'll be strait..

by the way, body, if you could.. return a honest vote to my battle
http://community.rapbattles.com/showthread.php?t=133180

hmm

durmil: easy win for you..you knew you won this..
your punches were hittin hard
the opener...wasnt too good but it'll do
your structure was good but people take advantage of putting smaller text cuz it stays in one line..but that fucks up your flow bad
your flow was not good
your multi's...were ok i saw a few
meta's....they werer hittin

body: ur shit was too basic...
your punches werent hittin hard as they culd of
ur personals were ok though
the structure was nasty
that flow was ok but still ASS
bad meta's
no multi's

vote:durmil

3-0 hit this up wot votes....and drop a link ill return the favor

This was pretty simple. I'm not gonna do my usual break down.
It would take like an hour.
Body Count
Your verse wasn't that bad. Your main problem is vocab, some times you used some dumb words (smitten). You had the right idea wit personal's but never really hit hard wit any of them. Mainly work on the vocab.
Durmil
This was a good drop. I see your trick of the font change to make your stretched lines fit. An that's ok for now. But you should fix it for the future when you battle more worthy heads. Try an be more original too. I see pattern's in your battles' wit your personal's. Just try and mix it up a lil bit. Not to take anything away from your drop. Very Nice. I think you took this easily.

[color-red]Vote/Durmil[/color]

Please hit up the battles in my sig wit honest votes. Thanks.

Vote/Durmil

sorry bout that...

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