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JaeBurnz354 07-02-04 06:39 PM

Freestyle to The unreleased D-Block beat
 
Yea yo,

Listen, I'm that nigga, with that trigga, not pulling it tho, I just put that safty on and smack that nigga.
I am number one, real recognize real.
That's anybody with a deal rght now I don't feel.
Reasons are because no1 spits truth no more.
Wiple floors with mc'z and cheat them out votes like bush did al gore.
So it will be a straight k.o.
Nigga like could i get one vote, I replied like no.
I'm mean I stay on my feet, Neva fight fair i lie, steal, and cheat.
Freak-a-leek fuck that i got ski's qucik to gimmie a look and get on they knee's.
It's Jae Burnz bitch let chapelle do diss me.
Kick rocks, nigga I'm rich bitch, I'll put a hit on you in the streets.
Fuck the gangsta talk, it's all about how the rhyme look these days.
But my way is and always will be to throw punches.
Punches thats right, punches so sick they have you throwin up ya lunches.
They dont want the kid to make it, simply because I'm young with an attitude.
America's worst nightmare, how did i get to that altitude.
I would like to know, maybe it's my flow, maybe it's something that we will neva know.
America want us to get legal jobs, but what we do when we got a record and get get a legal job.
We hustle off top fuck the being broke shit.
I done spoke bitch.
Now do what you want and take this keystyle how eva ya wanna.
But this kid is a problem, i'm jus spittin this to warn ya.

lil_ridah65 07-02-04 07:20 PM

it was good but u lost me a few times during ur rhymes so sticc 2 da script & stay on topic stop skippin around alot & u'll go far in diz rap game 4 sho

JaeBurnz354 07-02-04 07:58 PM

Thas wassup Good looks witht he advice


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