will a peer vs. missfiyagurl (100 posts to vote this!)
 

proof of acception *click here*

aight fa sho, rules are:
min 5 lines and max of uhmm 20 lines
i set it up and prefer u drop first
check in first then drop
due: sumtime today no exact time limit
no d/r
no c/v
no hate votes
no Unexplained
no bullshit... lol

Voting Critique (if not fractions!) should be similar to this! Copy and paste it... so ya don't forget... Plus EXPLAIN it, aight... gotta make it clear!!
opener:
flow:
multis:
vocab:
punches:
structure:
wordplay:
closing:
overall:

vote-

Unless y'all didn't notice ya need 100 posts to vote on this one... Let's do this! oh yeah good luck will a peer i mean 'Queen of RB'...
just blaze!!
MFG
~wun~


No show DQ

aight, Will asked for this to be post-poned til Monday, no problems with that from me... so it's set off until after the 4th of July...

but i'm checkin' in now

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checkity check check....

quit freepostin' and shut the fuck up, once (she, ya gurl) will a peer checks in i'll spit... so call her and get ya lame ass sumthin' to do, fuckin' bustdown! Read it again, when she checks in... i'll drop... get off them drugs and get a life... puta

lmao check in lol alrite spit away gurl
lk u funnyy

took sum time but at least ya made it... post-poner!! j/p
 

3 months countin’, she vacant in battles, this “Queen” anotha void
i’m impressed cuz u hold the same 9 wins since the 1st day i joined! (lol)
great use of pseudonyms, your title should say Queen of No-Show!
there’s no ‘Will’ to fight, this bitch always finds a ‘way’ to post-pone!!
this ya muthafukka adversary, come meet your “Enemy at the Gates”!
Fiya spit rhymes quicka than clockwork, Will just holds up barricades!
can’t manipulate a duchess, u a syndicate under my fuckin’ supremacy!
lame excuse for a legacy! scared to admit your rhymes suffer defiency?!!
split definition> Will: tha desire minus accuracy, there’s no ammunition!!
Fiya cross scrimmage lines, there’s no offense if u held shotgun’s position!!
lacking precision, “baptism of fire” I blessed your ‘First combat experience’
proven ‘inductive statistics->you duckin’ Fiya cuz she puts tha fear in this!!
tryna pretend you not a silhouette. it’s ‘bout time you meet tha substantial!
Mina n Babs, you droppin’ sweat! Fiya spit flamez that’s too hot to handle!!
this pivotal sinister lock you on four corners, Fiya sendin’ Black Plagues!
Will-A-Peer’s the first victim to submit to half the extent of Fiya’s rage!!
generatin’ heat to your structure ‘til your internals reach leveled secretion
limbs catch whiplash, Fiya dropped impacts on Will-->another paraplegic!
go back to Lyricists Lounge sit in that wheelchair--> your artificial throne!
right now claim u ‘will-a-peer’! cuz after this beeotch ur title ‘will-be-gone’!
Get At Me



*i ain’t got a dictionary but i know whut my shit means...
adversary: anotha word fa competitor
barricade: defense wall, or barrier
syndicate(2):person that holds position of government, Will was a member of Chryme Sindicate
supremacy: supreme or highest power
defiency: lack, shortage of sumthin’
inductive statistics: reason why stats are at stand still-- she ducks battles
silhouette->out-line (Will) vs. substantial->real (me)
Mina (Will), Babs (Me)... Mina vs. Babs (makin’ the band, Mina lost)
*not explainin’ wordplay> one phrase ends where arrow stop anotha starts up after

AIGHT will, u seen me now show these muthafukkas u can blaze... stick it out, ma...
Fiya Gurl
:nono:

well accordin to the rules.
due: sumtime today no exact time limit
that was on 07-03-04, 12:35 PM

she actually gave you like a week's le-way an u still didn't drop yesterday.
so.....by default....
opener: Miss
flow:Miss
multis:Miss
vocab:Miss
punches:Miss
structure:Miss
wordplay:Miss
closing:Miss
overall:Miss by a landsilde.
Vote/Missfiyagurl
tuff to win when u don't drop. no hate. just the rules.

Hit up the battles in my sig' wit honest votes as-well. Thanks

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Damn,missfiya got will runnin scared

rofl i gotta say, somebody just got ripped.. and really bad.. i hope she come hard lol..

Oh My Goooodness That Was Heat Missfiya. Where Is Will? Oh My!

^^ I don't know where will is... but thanx RapMisstress fa props... and star and calamity/ hoops i recognize the way u write...
wun

will a peer no showed...

...so missfiyagurl gets my vote...

for posting a verse.

i didnt no show she couldnt even pm me tellin me she dropped
and im not on here all the time like her ive been gettin packed 2 go to my family reunion in florida b4 my aunt who has lung cancer dies cause her tumor is now bigger than the size of a silver dollar and shes getting blood transfusions everyday so i just found out im goin down there so ur d/r can vote away :thumbup:

damn, u still here, latin stf up...
 

^1 proof i been told ya ass a long time ago to check in and once u do i'll drop... it's not my job to chase u all over RB to tell you to drop, u be on here everyday but can't check ya battles? wuteva... @ WILL A PEER

^^^i would be callin' out ya ghost-writer dumb ass, and only a STUPID person would say deficiency doesn't exist... u prolly had to look up every word i used, dumb hoe.. u can't even spell half the shit i used... ur crack-head ass prolly can't even say it... U annoyin' ppl, so shut the fuck up... Quit followin' Will's ass fuckin' dyke... just use ur prudency<oops my fault she has to look that up too... puta :nono:
@ latinkitten

Mind ya business or go find some... quit freepostin'... go complain sumwhere else...!!
Fiya Gurl

lol yea alright kid u didnt even spit the day i checked in and lk isnt followin me u guys just hate each other lol but y r u gettin votes lol go get me dqd or whatever

but its all godd i aint gonna hate nice drop u did better than i expected
can u do audio?