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QBsmasher vs Miss. Lyricist
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n/crew n/dr n/hate n/feeding you said it aint matter who dropped first, since im here i went ahead. |
Taking off the glove like arbys, 21 to rap with me, card me
Youll agree, the only votes she'll get is from her barbie Miss Lyricist, will be the nearest bitch, fearin this For real, dead serious, about leavin this chick, delirious The flows just too crazy, this daisy cant phase me Watch her fall like patrick swazy, nothin good since 1980 The Imperial Serial killer is, murdering her material Syck like venereal, she has no flavor like dry cereal So bored shes tryin to gain reward, rappin across a phone cord Fallin so much she must be walkin across a cribbage board Seen so many "stolen bars" she musta just broke out of prison Wishes she was hot, like late 2pac, but the dead hasnt risen The only thing "dirty" about her would be in her south I say, I speak for all, so please close your dirty mouth Hot thirteen year old tom boy, must think shes helen of troy If she sang sleeping with angels, she wouldnt be the Real Mccoy |
This nigga has a flow similar to molasses, nice, easy, and slow
My patience just ain’t everlastin- so I spit shit and go By the time I’m through with him, he’s knee deep in mire I gave ‘em an good whooping like I was his sire Swinging my belt like I’m Hercule with a sledge of doom “Sleep little boy, or I’ll make a switch from the broom” And did y’all know that the only thing this nigga could get to suck Is the vacuum he hides in his fucking toy trunk? I guess his PC must have “troubleshooting” because I ain’t been ‘smashed’ This retard types so much junk, the system went dead and crashed The only thing rolling, (besides me of course) Are the tears from yah mama, praying left her voice hoarse She’s just hoping your painful death won’t raise her ’surance fees (Now I know exactly who you got yo looks from, G You are somewhere between an IT and fucking SWAMP-THING) And just because you think you got a ‘smashing name’ Doesn’t mean you won’t get a ‘bashing mayne’ I squish you to a pulp, sip you with my Fruit Loops, mayne |
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Good battle overall:
QB: Damn hot verse, real nice flow to it as well and some decent multi's too. Basically an all round good verse although it could be a little more original. Had a few nice punches too whihc made me laugh: "The flows just too crazy, this daisy cant phase me Watch her fall like patrick swazy, nothin good since 1980" Miss:Nice verse, I think you had better personals but a few lines were wack and played, though your stlye was pretty creative. Fav. line was the opener: "This nigga has a flow similar to molasses, nice, easy, and slow My patience just ain’t everlastin- so I spit shit and go" Anyways, QB's was marinally better. VOTE: QBsmasher |
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Come on peeps...
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votes please :-)...
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Taking off the glove like arbys, 21 to rap with me, card me
Youll agree, the only votes she'll get is from her barbie The flows just too crazy, this daisy cant phase me Watch her fall like patrick swazy, nothin good since 1980 - yo qb had me rollin with a couple lines... heres a couple examples... nothing super crazy but a pretty decent verse all in all.. By the time I’m through with him, he’s knee deep in mire I gave ‘em an good whooping like I was his sire- I think Ms Lyricist was iight, she didn't come quite as hard as Qb's verse- Not a shitty verse, I just think she was outdone here...so Vote for QB... I'm not pollin untill one of yall drop a vote here.... http://community.rapbattles.com/showthread.php?t=132453 -- Link me back and I'll poll. |
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qb: youve elevated alot ive seen ur improvement ur structure is much better..good job your punches were hittin pretty hard your flow was good throughout the whole battle your meta's were hittin saw bout couple multi's good shit dawg miss: what happened here...u pulled some nice shit but not as hot as usual your flow was ok...not amazing your structure was ugly...i wasnt feelin it ur punches were hittin ur personals were hittin good meta's no multi's good shit vote: QB |
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