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MoTiF 07-03-04 08:33 PM

Savior
 
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Lost Thoughts of the Soul wander the Universe..
Unable to withhold inside a Body a Mental Curse..
Blood Runs Through the Body with a Lost Flow..
Save the World Enable us the Power to Know..
Serenity in Arms reach if There was a Nudge..
Hate has Seperated him from a Holding Grudge..
Watching in Wait for the Walls to all Collapse..
Send a Savior Down to fill our Mindly Gaps..
Rain falls as a Breeze of Life is Set Upon..
Fallen Souls replaced The Hatred is Gone..
No Longer will a Empty Body fill a Grave..
He has Come Full Force to Mortally Save..

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candy 07-16-04 02:38 AM

it's a good poem but it could be better

The Mexican 07-16-04 02:50 AM

ay...good poem...had real good imagery...like it...keep dat comin...peace

mcmix 07-16-04 03:24 AM

nice poem keep up the good job


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