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Savior
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Lost Thoughts of the Soul wander the Universe.. Unable to withhold inside a Body a Mental Curse.. Blood Runs Through the Body with a Lost Flow.. Save the World Enable us the Power to Know.. Serenity in Arms reach if There was a Nudge.. Hate has Seperated him from a Holding Grudge.. Watching in Wait for the Walls to all Collapse.. Send a Savior Down to fill our Mindly Gaps.. Rain falls as a Breeze of Life is Set Upon.. Fallen Souls replaced The Hatred is Gone.. No Longer will a Empty Body fill a Grave.. He has Come Full Force to Mortally Save.. ... |
it's a good poem but it could be better
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ay...good poem...had real good imagery...like it...keep dat comin...peace
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nice poem keep up the good job
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