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LethalNJection Vs datruth29
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due in 30 mintues blind spit good luck |
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After I slay him, he'll turn around and be my fuckin Groupie/
This dude is 10-0, but got all of his wins battling Newbies/ You're too weak, you're styles' dirty like a Bum in a Small Park/ Shit, you have no bite, your like stripped wood, Nothin but All Bark/ I can freestyle a fuckin album and Make It A CLassic/ Far as parties, you couldn't rock a house if you "Made It From Granet"/ In battles I usually Project Sound, But I'll just eat you with the Text Style/ KnockOut's, won't be a next round, flame, I stay with heat like Reptiles/ I take care of you "cats" one by one, like vertranarians/ This dude knows it, so he avoids the "beef", like vegitarians/ Coz you cofuse peeps on what the hell you be Yappin ABout/ You just need to "SHUT YOUR TRAP" like you were Catchin A Mouse/ |
Lol..The truth hurts when you already got banned 2 times....*
shyt this fag doent learn he gotcought bitten eminem Rhymes this dudes rhymes about as vicious as a dog without a bark... ur chances of winnin are like a blind man seein in dark... im guaranteein sparks, my verse harder than ron jeremy on viagra... this faggot always BLOW-ME (below me) the way he's fallin down niagra... im stallin so i can grab ya, put ya temples back in ya brain... stick his tonsils in his stomach, his rhymes so whack he's havin chest pains... im the best mane, they say im a one man wreckin machine... they should call me da lyrical surgeon the way i tear apart ya spleen... my heart is mean, i flame this dude like my face was the sun... only 9 milli u got is ur dick, so dont even talk about guns... ----------------------- *he got banned for bitting and voting for him self Cookie AND horus(thetruth) |
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^SLANDER: doesn't count as part of the battle, don't be scared hun..... |
yes i know that doesnt count as my verse its an explenation...
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It doesn't matter, I owned you anyways.. lmao, that verse you wrote was >>>>>
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lethal took dis one easily..nice spit, good flow and great personals and punches.. datruth iight spit but u need elevation on ur punches and personals they just werent hittin hard at all man..no hate but lethal got dis one
return the favor and vote on da battle in my sig |
HIs punches were not hot?... what r you talkin about
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well thankz but i really dont think he had better punchlines but w/e
uppin ........please |
LMFAO!!!
What is there to say about this battle? Well...Datruth sucks...he bit off of Eminem...(I saw that) which pisses me the fuck off....but his verse in this battle only had a decent structure. No hate dawg, but you need to elevate... Lethal took this easy wit mad punches and personals...flow was on, and structure was damn near perfect. Vote- Lethal. No Hate. Vote disqualified for inadequate feedback. Please see this thread if you need help on what qualifies as an acceptable explanation. |
C'mon dog, i'vr read yo rhymes Limited Edition, how can someone weaker and younger than TELL ME TO elevate...
and if you say that I stole Eminems rhyme then you didn't read it...... I said Eric Sermon's name aNd ya'll are so childish and are on Eminem's dick so hard that I can't say Eric Sermon's name at all... What If Eminem rhymed Rock with Sock.. Can I rhyme Rock with Lock, or would that be stealing? get a life....' And I still down see what punches you are talking about... his rhyme sequence first line and down... TIMES/ RHYMES/ Bark/ (HE TRIES TO STEAL MY OWN PUNCHLINE) Dark/ Viagra/ niagra/ Brain/ Pains/ machine/ spleen/ sun/ guns/ Lmao, dr suess rhymes man.... punchlines... "i'm as vicious as a dog with no bark" VICIOUS DOGs DON"T BARK, THEY BITE, plus you took my punch... "he's harder than Ron Jeremy on Viagra" Gay Then he wants be to blow him, and says I fell dow niagra falls? Was that even a punchline? he says that my rhyme is so whack i'm having chest pain.. Senseless, someone explain that... then he's a surgeon coz he rips my spleen... is this really that creative? then he burns me like the sun, then talks about how big my dick is... Gay again And you give him a vote because........................ DICKRIDING... uPPIN FOR SOME HONEST VOTES.. NOT BASED ON ONE WHACK ASS PERSONAL... |
K, DaTRuth - I've learnt from battlin' you before you've got some of the sickest punches I've read on this site whcih is pretty good for a flyweight, you had a nice verse right there. A decent combination of personals and punches which set up a massive challenge for Lethal, my fav. line was the opener about battlin newbies and the vegetarian bars, nice stuff.
Lethal your verse was cool but I just got the feelin' it was pre-written as it lacked personals, an the ending talking about 9milli's that was cool, but i dont think DaTruth actually said anything about 'em. Ah well your verse was aight but not good enough to beat DaTruth. vote - datruth peace |
Truth's was just gay everything about it Elevate on the real
Lethal: You just merked him no need to explain Structure: Lethal Flow: Lethal Punches: Lethal Personals: lethal Vote: Lethal Vote disqualified for inadequate feedback. Please see this thread if you need help on what qualifies as an acceptable explanation. |
damn datruth you get fucking mad dick riders on you dont you
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