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One-Man-Band vs Hoops
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16 max 50 posts to vote you spit first.. one |
meh verse
got a theory on why they call this guy one man band..
cause he rides solo, dolo, just him and his hand!!..1 i dont know whats worse, constant masterbation or bad rhymes.. so he decided for me...........and does both at the same time..2 recollect,you couldnt post "hot" text with a burnt keyboard.. and ya rhymes smell more ass than phones hear SEE MORE..(see more butts)3 label me tarot card reader,special olypics your future plan.. kid couldnt tell left from right if i smacked em with both hands!..4 *smacksmack*,launchin attacks,verbally smashin his ass.. makin presents for his teacher,only time hes rappin for class..(status)5 raking up leaves only times hes ever moved large crowds.. breaking the keys M C, only way he'd rip me into shrouds..6 you are bout as useful as a black man to the KKK.. writing directions to my verse,wouldnt help you "walk this way"..7 im leaving you dis-armed like a Gimp vietnam-verteran.. just wait to see the votes,and you'll see its you im better-than..8 Aight playboi... you turn, and good luck bruh =) |
"makin presents for his teacher,only time hes rappin for class." haha..lol.. nice
but anyway, onto my verse... Yo, im amazin-n-fly, when it comes to punches im the most dangerous-guy.. hmm.. your verse wasnt that bad, hell it took you a whole day-to-reply.. but wack raps ya writin-a-pile... truth is man you aint been tight-in-a-while.. I aint gonna say you suck though.. how could you? you been bitin-my-style.. punch to make ya sinuses-spill, im the king of this place n ya higness-is-ill.. put my nines-to-ya-grill... ya multi attempts look like mine minus-the-skill.. man, ya lines-are-not-ill.. ill divide-em-with-cuts, rippin ya pride-n-ya-guts.. masterbation lines are played... specially when your the one ridin-my-nuts!..* I hate doin gay jokes.. the thing is this guy keeps straddlin-men.. needed to boost his ego, so he decided hed start battlin-fems.. but wait.. the votes showed miss. lyricist took-him-wit-size.. dont be fooled by this "vet", hoops is just a rook-in-disguise!!!** im rockin-ya-brains.. go ahead talk-bout-my-name, im breakin-ya-chin.. If im battlin hoops... but i flawlessed-the-dame... who u thinks takin-this-win??*** leave ya heart achin-n-grim.. my punches pack heat, start bakin-ya-skin.. for me this aint comin hard.. me n "hoops" buds so im just "playin"-with-him *check the "flawlessed-the-dame" link and itll explain this punch. **he battled "miss lyricist" and lost i think.. then they battled again and its a tie so far.. and "vet" is his little title under his name ***link explains all one anyone who votes, post a link and we'll return the favour |
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personals-One...all over him wit personals multi's-One Creativity-tie Enjoyment-Hoops fuck this is tough...ima have to vote for One-Man...had tight punches personals were sick and it flowed just fine......Hoops ur verse was tight too....u started off real hott but ur verse kinda went downhill near the bottom...never the less great shit but u got edged out tight battle....and Hoops can u drop an HONEST vote on my battle against east miles plz....peace |
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aight..uppin 0-2.. uppin for some vet votes.. vets get off your asses lol..
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yo hoops i went over to elevated front lines to earn some favours.. voted on a battle then realised i couldnt poll...lol.. ah well
uppin one |
Damn this shit was syck, I liked this battle. I started out and I was reading hoops verse, and I was like man this dude got murked. Hoops was killin it, then I went on and started reading One-Man-Band, and he didnt start off too well, but then it just took off, and the verse was straight sick. The wordplay was excellent, and flow was tight, structure was cool. The personals was ILL, he was all over that. Im sorry hoops but he was all up on that shit. Punches was nice from both of you, but One-Man-Band was hittin harder. This battle was a good one though.
v/one Please drop me an honest vote, I dont think hoops can cause the dudes in his crew. http://community.rapbattles.com/showthread.php?t=133225 |
got a theory on why they call this guy one man band..
cause he rides solo, dolo, just him and his hand!!..1 Aight opener, a little simplistic..7/10 i dont know whats worse, constant masterbation or bad rhymes.. so he decided for me...........and does both at the same time..2 Heh, aight nice..made me laugh which was good 8/10 recollect,you couldnt post "hot" text with a burnt keyboard.. and ya rhymes smell more ass than phones hear SEE MORE..(see more butts)3 Weak & wack punchline..6/10 label me tarot card reader,special olypics your future plan.. kid couldnt tell left from right if i smacked em with both hands!..4 WAck..no hot punches yet..5/10 *smacksmack*,launchin attacks,verbally smashin his ass.. makin presents for his teacher,only time hes rappin for class..(status)5 There we go..nice..8/10 raking up leaves only times hes ever moved large crowds.. breaking the keys M C, only way he'd rip me into shrouds..6 WAAAAAAAACK the first line is simplistic 4/10 you are bout as useful as a black man to the KKK.. writing directions to my verse,wouldnt help you "walk this way"..7 Okay..the first line fucked it up..simplsitic again..5/10 im leaving you dis-armed like a Gimp vietnam-verteran.. just wait to see the votes,and you'll see its you im better-than..8 WEAAK closer...wasnt good enough 4 a closer..5/10 48/80 Yo, im amazin-n-fly, when it comes to punches im the most dangerous-guy.. hmm.. your verse wasnt that bad, hell it took you a whole day-to-reply.. hah...from wut i see in time..that is true..nice..9/10 but wack raps ya writin-a-pile... truth is man you aint been tight-in-a-while.. I aint gonna say you suck though.. how could you? you been bitin-my-style.. [b]lmao...nice nice nice...lmao..8/10 punch to make ya sinuses-spill, im the king of this place n ya higness-is-ill.. put my nines-to-ya-grill... ya multi attempts look like mine minus-the-skill.. good multi..good..8.5/10 man, ya lines-are-not-ill.. ill divide-em-with-cuts, rippin ya pride-n-ya-guts.. masterbation lines are played... specially when your the one ridin-my-nuts!..* LMAO..nice..nice..but try not to feed off 7/10 I hate doin gay jokes.. the thing is this guy keeps straddlin-men.. needed to boost his ego, so he decided hed start battlin-fems.. iight..nuttin special 5/10 but wait.. the votes showed miss. lyricist took-him-wit-size.. dont be fooled by this "vet", hoops is just a rook-in-disguise!!!** nice..the rook-in-diguise..good 8/10 im rockin-ya-brains.. go ahead talk-bout-my-name, im breakin-ya-chin.. If im battlin hoops... but i flawlessed-the-dame... who u thinks takin-this-win??*** okay..just complimentin ya self..5/10 leave ya heart achin-n-grim.. my punches pack heat, start bakin-ya-skin.. for me this aint comin hard.. me n "hoops" buds so im just "playin"-with-him niiiiice closer...betta than Hoops..7.5/10 58/80 VOTE-Band ----------------------- Can both of yall vote on my current battle wit 'Louis Vuittion' it's quite amusing..please vote..vote hoenstly and professionally.. http://community.rapbattles.com/showthread.php?t=133302 |
uppin for votes...
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aiight, hoops, you had some good lines, opener was pretty tight, but like sum otha peeps is sayin, tha second bar about mastabation was too much, tha see more line was a bit childish, but it still worked, tha rappin fo class line was pretty tight, i liked that. and tha closer was aiight 2. overall, it was a good verse, i liked it.
aiight one man, u got a good style dog, tha opener was aiight, tha line about him bitin yo style was pretty tight, n u carried it on well with tha minus-tha-skill line, i didnt git why u said u hate doin gay jokes then did one right after that.. tha rook in disguise line was tight like prom night nigga i liked that one lol basically, i was feelin bands verse mo. he came with sum good punches n kept it goin throughout tha verse.. good battle tho. vote-band |
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