Smegal/golum
 

ok...i am writing about..THE TWO TOWERS...i am Smegal/Gollum


alone at night, starlight, cursing i search...two little thieves
mystically drawn, not caring about the rustling of the leaves
the ring is my goal,blinded by envy and uncompromising greed
like a cat drawn to feed...i must cause these thieves to bleed
as i strike..unknowingly...hobbits sleep easy and i them awoke
quickly i am captured,i feel guilt as a sword is held to my throat
somethin trips in my head...a transition between good and evil...
strangely now calm and peacefull...why is this happening to smegal?
i feel unjustifiable sadness as the rope twists and burns.....
i just want to be set free..they are my friends..on them i wont turn..
i want them to trust me...yet i know im unrelliable..schitzofrenic
i long to be freed..from my alta ego..panic..and crazy psycho-manic
please..i know the way to moldor..i can lead you to the black gate
i want to help..avoiding treachury...i hope this journey isnt my fate...
alone trembling..hiding from the voice in my head....
get out of there i said..i want to be friend not foe instead..
drawn to the ring as they sleep..overcome with greed i rise to my feet
but fight i must...i can conquer this lust..and im not about to be defeat
painfull scornfull fight,...but mentally this pain is deep in my head..
i long to get rid of...this time i only just manage to overcome the dread..
what do i want...who is stronger..am i gollumn?..or smegal???...
well that debate could go on foreva..like EM or Royce?..bad or evil?

DROP sum honest feedback on this piece.......................

shit was pretty good man nice drop

upin sum feed

nice good job keep it up

nice job on this... I saw it already in the battle against LE- you both came pretty nice, props to you for only just having seen the movie---- and Dons sig is dope... 1

Nice spit mate come tight in this topical.

Nice spit dawg gl in our battle..............

that's hot way to go

that was really good

ay feelin dat liked da way u used both parts of da character...most def a hott drop

gollums tha shit boy....i can do his voice so u know im down....any thing wit him is tha best...