illiance VS Doggydogg69
 

Aight Wassup, rules are:

-You drop first, I've never dropped second in a battle before.

-You bitch/dick riding/crew votes, keep 'em explained.

-10-16 lines.

-Check in, then drop after 20 minutes.

Good luck, I need to grab some food but I'll check in in a bit.

Peace.

Here It Goes Muvva
 

Here let me break my verse into sections to help Quote-For-You
Im mean yu continue yu win against Kids cuz I had to Vote-For-You

DoggyDogg will heat up rhymes to put Riot past the Boiling-Point
So like Pissed Off Weed Smokers…I’m Foiling-This-Joint

The Dirty Circus? Is This Where White Thugs Chill These-Days?
Cuz This Kid Gets In More Shit, Then Gay Three-Ways

This Kid Takes Forever To Drop As Many Lines In a Battle
He Logs On In Invisible Mode, Just Like His Fuckin' Shadow

Like clovers with no leafs, yur bad luck…and like Stingy Hoes you just Suck
And even if yu were 2 of 50 Cent you wouldn’t be worth a Buck

Riot’s vocab is consistent to that of my 7 Year Old Brother
I know Faggot’s Love Blankets…that’s why He stays Under-Cover

Now I see why everybody you meet seems to Hate-Ya-Shit
Cuz when you accept the battle you constantly Wait-To-Spit

I Break-Ya-Clit that’s the only way your Not-Feelin-Me
And Im so Dope I gotta tell him in person Stop-Dealin-Me

Yo you must be be embarressed coming first so listen-
Who the fuck is "Riot"? And that's not a pre-written?
Like a "summer sale" your rhymes straight "off tha shelves",
My name's not "Riot", you must be battlin' someone else!
You're nothin to me, jus a thorn in the side of my figure,
Your NURSERY RHYMES ain't shit, mine have parental advisory stickers,
Gay? I ain't got much against them but y'all should know,
Dogg should jerk off to my verse, its the only way he can "hold his own",
You pretend to rip an I don't wanna offend this kid,
But you only came to RB cos you get a free "member"ship,
So my name's not Riot, now no-one should pretend G,
That you're just wack by postin' someone else's verse against me,
So fuck you, only with dickriders can you defeat this,
Let's face it your rhymes ain't shit, I've seen better lines on zebras...

Peeze

rofl... riot kid.. riot??

ok
dog:i heard alot of those punches before.. almost all of them, so originality and creativity poins went down the drain :(..and you used another emcees name against him.. thats almost a automatic lost man... i assume you loked over your spit after you typed.. sine you had the time to..

illiance:saw a few funn ylines lol... felt this verse much more.. good job, flow was on, and liked the punches..good job

v/illiance

WOW iLLIANCE TOOK THIS SHIT EASY MAN !!!!

DOGG -CAME WITH A GOOD FLOW AND SOME OK PUNCHES , BUT U FUCKED UP WID DAT RIOT SHIT!!!

ILLIANCE- GOOD ALTHROUGH , NICE VERSE !!!

vOTE- ILLIANCE

return da fava n hit my shit up peace !!!

my battle

yo
illiance u gd
yo dawg
i kno i aint gd , doin this only for 1month & a half
still by doin battles agenst better persons
im bout learn it quicker then instead of battling new rookies like myself


VOTE ILLIANCE
pz

uppin.............................................

uppin........................................again , c'mon lets get this finished yo!

doggydogg69:..................hmmmm........... your flow was on point so
that was ok.............but your punches shit man you had plenty of
self-glorification lines & that screws things up for you!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
originality/creativity was not well at all......................................

illiance: you came pretty good throughout your entire verse big up
to you on that.........your punches were nice I was feelin' mostly
all of em.............originality/creativity was ok..........................
flow was real good!!!!

vote goes to: illiance

do a honest vote on my shit links in the signature people!

lol he posted a verse written to someone else against him

LOL

nuff said

v/illiance