Scriptive vs. bigchase
 

ok the rules are:

no feeding
no biting
no d/r votes
no hate votes
no CREW votes... lol

ill spit first 10 lines max... lets just hope i can win... good luck! :thefinger

ok im gonna do this nice and easy...

bigchase is a discrace, he should be replaced for people who have good taste-
this guy's the greatest rapper alive he just uses copy and paste-
you aint good enough to have your own crew your not blessed-
not like me, ill still throw punch lines while resisting arrest-
i was raised in the north west, your wife needs a pregnancy test-
but may i suggest, you tell her you've had the snip, it's for the best-
you want me to battle you, you say this is my rap test-
but im tesing you you didn't think id be this good-
ill come over your house and be like robbin hood-
robbin from the rich and giving to the poor-
now ive finished this battle, your unsicure-

no hate... peace out...

ooooo sorry man.......had a fourth july party........tons of m-80ss evrywhere......

sorry man.......ima go see spider-man 2 lol.........busy.....lots of fourth july parts even thoguh they late....

wait....ima spit.......ima type it up now unless my friend calls fo them ixtape but.......REW votes is what its about....shouldnt our crew vote hwose bettter....honest votes.......?........or isnt not really a crew cuz not enough mebers

Scriptive must be extremly compassionate to boost my record
Didnt realize raps like chess, analyze your moves or else youll be checkered..
From the UK which only has had one good rapper Slick Rick
Insecure?!? I aint the one with a toddler sized dick..
You aint even in the crew your ranks a poser thats a hunch
Next time you battle me make shure your lines have a punch..
Taste your defeat at my hands withouth self glorification
Rob the rich how could you do that to yourself and your whole nation..
Nice and Easy dont cut it kid, and I am the best teenage rapper alive
Try originality instead of rippin simplistic shit from "Get Rich or Die Tryin"..

theres wordplay and lots othas in my freestyle....if u aint understand ur retarded...lol

Scripture ya flow was iight but you rhymed with test twice and it threw tha shit off kno wut im sayin and u came a lil simplistic on this one.....Big Chase came in this battle for tha win and got my vote for it

vote-Big Chase

scriptive your flow was all over the place son..you had good flow though
punches was ight good job son

big chase..punches was on point structure was bomb good shit son


v/big chase

thnx playas thnx.......appreciate it....no hate scriptive......

Scriptive you opened up pretty good, nice punch about the copy and paste. It seemed though as you went on your lines got shorter and shorter, like you were tired or something, you didnt seem to be in it. That really hurt your structure, a few punches not many good metas or multis, and no personals.

BigChase, some real nice metas in there, i guess im not stupid lol. The flow was pretty consistent thru the rhyme, i was feelin it...you could put that to some beat and go with it thats what i like. Your punches were hittin thru the verse, and you came pretty hard. Kept up the tempo that you started with, then you ended your verse well too.

v/BigChase

Return the favor please:

http://community.rapbattles.com/showthread.php?t=133401

aqight i thought that was a good battle... well i can only improve can't i...

punchlines - big chase
oppening verse - big chase
closing verse - scriptive
flow - big chase
metaz - big chase

vote - big chase
big chase won this 4 me from constant flow n not looseing where his flow was heading but he drifted off at the end. he had a good flow but can be disqualified or loose votes for feeding off scriptures verse !!!!!!

drop a fair vote on these link ......aight

http://community.rapbattles.com/showthread.php?t=133335

http://community.rapbattles.com/showthread.php?t=133370

http://community.rapbattles.com/showthread.php?t=133487

nah don't disqualify him, i aint botherd, i was tryin to prove that i was good enough to be in his crew... but never mind!

ya are.....fo' now......but youll lcut if ya dont elevate or improve....

Scriptive
structure was ok...ur lines started out stretched, but then u took them back down...flow fell off cause of the first half bein stretched...u had a few metas...wordplay was decent...a few of ur punches connected...no good personals...

BigChase
structure is pretty good...u had 1 stretched line though...flow fell off a very small amout cause of that one stretched line...no metas...wordplay was good...some of ur punches connected...no good personals...

Overall
Scripitive had more metas...neither had good personals...BigChase had the better structure...as well as a slightly more stable flow...he also had better wordplay...and more connecting punches...so basing off of that...BigChase gets my vote...

VOTE - BIGCHASE

PLEASE return the favor with an honest vote on the link in my sig...thanx...