illiance VS flash
 

10-16 lines

You spit first.

No crew/dick votes.

Check in, then verse due 30 mins after.

Peeze.

never said i spit first

your the one making the call out so you spit first

Haha ok I didn't realiser even someone with 400 more post than me, with a 4-0 battle record stating "un-defeated" in your signature would be bitchin' about dropping first, 'speically when my record's 0-1.

You really too scared to drop before me?

hell no i just do it how its supposed to....the person who calls out spits first

if you would have answered my call out i would have gone first but whatever

you still wanna do this now that your going firsT?

haha not a fuckin' problem, gimme time to check in though I need to eat.

Peeze.

iight fuck it this kid is scared

NO FEEDING

^^included in the rules

haha whatever man checkin' in, good luck, wouldn't wanna fuck up you're record...haha

K, here it is:

I see fear in your thoughts by the smears in your shorts,
Hit you with a 2 by 4 cos I'm "board" of hearing you talk,
Only thing you "drop" is to the ground, outlines appearing in chalk,
You know these punches get up inside you like a veneral wart,
Bout to get steadily ripped-postin' first to scary huh, bitch?
I'm like an obese acrobatic-my verse too "heavy to flip",
Bout to bury you prick like you into bondage, ready to be whipped,
Treat you like a kindergarden like this is a lesson-dismissed,
This joke is cursed, you like to "go up against" kids like a pope in church,
I feel like a mailman on speed the way I'm always postin' first,
Wack folks dispersed - "4-0 undefeated",
Only way you're "down" wit this is under my feet kid,
Your mind prays as you read this I see your eye glaze,
Your styles so out of focus it's like you're lookin' sideways,
Define rape-it's jus surprise sex an you've had it from behind, mate,
You're robbed of this win so bad you'd think it was a crime wave.

Peeze.

Imma Leave Lil Q In A 'Daze' With His 'Eyes Glazed' His Rhymes Are Poor...
0-3 'Record' That Should Tell Ya To Quit Rap,Battle Me You'll Need Life Support...
Givin' NoloProps, Your Doto~Drops Like Einsten From Genius To 2.0 GPA...
Hey Prostitute Get On The Street & Fuck A Guy,Then Give Him Tha Pay..
.........This kid Illiance will get koed after i spit one bar of Datruth...
..........Kid does text is cause hes scared to step inside the booth...
Kid freeposting in my thread sayin to put up a poll in my battle...
Now hes gettin the worst knockout of his life in this stupid battle...
Lose To Me, You Groupie,Foolishly Thinkin' You Can Lyrically Shoot Me In Tha Gut..
Now To Finish,Bitch Like A Fingerless Tailor, You're Just Not Making The Cut...

my bad i was gunna use that opener against Lil'q but decided for you here is the edited version

Imma Leave Illiance In A 'Daze' With His 'Eyes Glazed' His Rhymes Are Poor...
0-1 'Record' That Should Tell Ya To Quit Rap,Battle Me You'll Need Life Support...
Givin' NoloProps, Your Doto~Drops Like Einsten From Genius To 2.0 GPA...
Hey Prostitute Get On The Street & Fuck A Guy,Then Give Him Tha Pay..
.........This kid Illiance will get koed after i spit one bar of Datruth...
..........Kid does text is cause hes scared to step inside the booth...
Kid freeposting in my thread sayin to put up a poll in my battle...
Now hes gettin the worst knockout of his life in this stupid battle...
Lose To Me, You Groupie,Foolishly Thinkin' You Can Lyrically Shoot Me In Tha Gut..
Now To Finish,Bitch Like A Fingerless Tailor, You're Just Not Making The Cut...

nice spit both of u..good personals and punches from flash

Givin' NoloProps, Your Doto~Drops Like Einsten From Genius To 2.0 GPA...
Hey Prostitute Get On The Street & Fuck A Guy,Then Give Him Tha Pay..
^nice bar..liked the first line, second line is kinda played but its iight

illiance, good spit u had sum punches but dey didnt hit as hard as flash's

Bout to get steadily ripped-postin' first to scary huh, bitch?
I'm like an obese acrobatic-my verse too "heavy to flip",
^prolly ur best bar, last line was funny but there was no punch

v/flash he just came harder and wanted it more..no hate

return the favor, vote on the battle in my sig

Illiance- you had a aight verse...your punches were nice but sum just didnt hit hard enough ya know...your structure was decent...you had an okay flow...but overall manye elevate kid...

Flash- your verse was better...and also you had better hard hitin punches...and an decent flow...so overall you get my vote for hard hitin punches...

v/Flash

Illiance- Yours was good you came hard and everything your best lines was actually
Bout to bury you prick like you into bondage, ready to be whipped,
Treat you like a kindergarden like this is a lesson-dismissed,
^^go shit

Flash- overall was good but you cam harder your best lines was
Givin' NoloProps, Your Doto~Drops Like Einsten From Genius To 2.0 GPA...
Hey Prostitute Get On The Street & Fuck A Guy,Then Give Him Tha Pay..
^^ good shit

Overall Flash came harder so I have to give it to him

ILLIANCE-no you didnt really hit hard..you came god with the structure
but mainly no similies or metaphores which leads to no balance but keep eleveting

Flash-You hit harder and you took this becuz you had what
a battles needs even though you didnt really hit hard but some
lines I liked.

v/Flash return the fav

Ill- not a very solid verse...as in you didnt come hard in my opinion
the only thing working for you was your struc...didnt see many personals
which brings down your verse

6.5/10

Flash- your drop was nice...not great though..but you hit harder with your
punches than Ill and used some personals which is why you take this

7/10

vote-flash