Brief key style-peep this
 

makin a calaboration, peeps lined in admiration..
hyped like celebration,more known than masterbation..
its dedication!..that i give to hip hop and my raps..
flip-flopps..a fitted hat,a Tip-top shirt from Chaps..(polo)
im the heir to the thrown,take my crown, and leave bare to ya dome..
critical-care you to floors,hit with more rights than left could ignore..
Im sicker than any disease will allow.if you got beef,battle it out right now..
fuck being patient, im wasted,im ready to introduce emcees faces to pavement..
leave bodies floored and adjacent,stopped in thier tracks like complacement..
i aint afraid to die, i take pills and pop acid to eyes..
so what makes you think id let you live for lashin out at this guy..
im on a mission to strait blast..
fuck going strait,came to a fork in the road and went back!..

flow is good if you consider the multies and the sylables

UPPIn for feedback

pretty good fro a keystyle.keep reppin.your rhymes flow well and the structure is pretty good.7/10

Yea
Very Good 4 A Key Style
I Feeling The Whole Thing But The Last 3 Lines I Particular

Goood Shit Keep Working Hard
8-10
1 Luv

thanx yo.. uppin

uppin