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Malefic 07-04-04 06:17 PM

Malefic Vs. verbal violence
 
10 lines.
Due in an Hour.
No Feeding.
No Dick Riding.
No Biting.

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Malefic 07-04-04 06:18 PM

Checked In.

verbal violence 07-04-04 06:20 PM

check i will drop after you aight good luck dawg~one~

Malefic 07-04-04 07:26 PM

This kid's words are gettin fuck'd like him right after Surmon's-
Wanna Flame wit Spark, I'll Pop-dis Tart an leave dis flamer Burnin.
You front In text like Airports and Turbin's..Ya skill's ar foreign
500 posts?Figured u would have got the picture by now an left the forum
Verb's lost-'signed another one...jus to make an up an Eyedentity...
Comin' agressivly' tords me?...you better like it Rectally...
Cus u tryna step to me....Is like Oprah witta Visectamy, its Useless-
I'll leave you hangin hardcore...like Rosie Odonell "strap-less"...
Break your Face wit my fists. Nose n shit....lookin like a Civic Grill kit-
Screw'd Like a Craftsman drill Bit'....special order, just to fit dis bitch

sorry late-couldn't help. went to tacobell.....NO FEEDING-

verbal violence 07-04-04 07:31 PM

aihgt if i had to say elvis was back//
id say he aint black and that he turned wACK//

verbal violence 07-04-04 07:39 PM

my bad i mest up i accidently pressed enter but here it is
ayo is i had to say elvis was back//
malefic wouldnt campare cuz both is wack//
i got more tricks up my sleeve than the rabbit had//
i rbing diseases that poison ya flow and give ehart attacks//
lyrical theises that extend and retract//
malefic got restricted form rb cuz my flows did react//
he talkin out his breath save it for a more better yet//
scroched with flows that extended and he choked to death//(choked get it)
ima leave him scared wit nuttin left let as i infect//
cuz he got beat by the best,leave him to steady rest//

uppin fo votes on this

Durmil 07-04-04 07:59 PM

Punches-Malific
Flow-Malific
Creativity-Malific
Structure-Malific
Overall-Malific

pretty one sided battle....verbal u just needed to come harder for real.....

can you drop HONEST votes on this battle of mine sicne i voted on thsi one...thanx p
http://community.rapbattles.com/showthread.php?t=132614

Malefic 07-05-04 12:06 PM

Nice. Uppin (1)

Malefic 07-05-04 05:38 PM

Uppin. (2)

Decree Wun 07-05-04 05:42 PM

bored as fuck

one sided battle AGAIN lmfao

structure was pretty good malefic
your flow was off though
good multi's
your punches were hittin hard
your personals were hittin hard
good meta's

verbal: step up your game pimpin
ur flow was aiight
ur structure was ugh..
ur punches were ok
ur personals were ok

Miss. Lyricist 07-05-04 09:42 PM

Both of you had a nice structure, but then the differences came in. Flow went easily to Malefic, verb seemed kinda choppy. Personals- Malefic, though there weren't that many. Punches go to Malefic, Verb didn't have any. (Ha, rhymes) Part of his verse didn't even make sense. You gotta hit a littler harder, verbal, to get a win.

vote- Malefic

Malefic 07-06-04 12:45 PM

Nice. Uppin (3)

Malefic 07-06-04 08:54 PM

Uppin. 4.

Malefic 07-07-04 05:13 AM

Uppin 5.

~Lady Fiya~ 07-07-04 04:48 PM

Aight, i'm closing this...
one-sided< pretty obvious...

malefic: betta structure
nice use of metas, nice punches,
pretty good flow overall

verbal violence:
flow was straight
structure needs work on
punches were ok
personals were not bad but not enuff

my vote: malefic


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