Dreams
 

check out this new track i did in tha studio, its called dreams

www.soundclick.com/freshemcee

some feedback plz

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uppin fo some feedback ya'll, dun sleep on this

come on uppin..dun sleep on this

uppin come on peeps dun sleep on this. wanna get some feedbak on this track

fark man, i want some feedbak on this...uppin this muthafuka

come on ya'll dont sleep on this, its a hot track. uppin fo some feedback

yo first off... fuck everybody else for not listenin to this-----
iight heres a little critique-- no hate involved.

On the intro it sound kinda like you tryin to hard to talk to the beat instead of talkin from ya heart--- but then again you from australia if that shits true-- then maybe its a culture thing or just a difference in accent-- whatever--- The cat singin the hook sounds like he got a voice, but his vocals are too low for me to understand to well cuz he's hittin the same notes as the beat so they mesh--- flow wise I think you got the idea, there was some emotion to your voice though it didn't come through very strong, I could see you were rhymin alot without it really soundin like rhymin if that makes sense to you, its like you weren't emphasizing the same sounds in the same places, just work on that-- I think your lyrics were on point and I felt the topic- keep doin this, get better-- stay up... 1

thanks fo tha feedbak...uppin for mo ppl

The singing part should have been left out because the dude can't sing and you can't understand what he is saying.Your voice should have been louder then the beat because the beat is over ya voice.The lyrics were good.Your flow & delivery was good.Overall a pretty good audio,except that damn course.That shit is horrible.Also I didn't really like that ending.But other than that I give it a 8/10.

thanks man..well chorus volume shud hav bin louder.sounded aiight on tha guyz speakers wen we got it recorded but oh well...thanks man
uppin fo some mo feedbak

uppin fo a few more comments, come on

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