critique one of my songs.
 

http://www.soundclick.com/bands/4/eyedentdymusic.htm

Im going to put up more better songs soon, I just wanted people to know wat me and my boyz sound like on the mic. the 2 songs on the bottom are really old and shit but the one involving my boyz is kinda new and fresh.

yo song was ok lyrically, ya flow an delivery needs work u was kinda rushing some of ya words in that first track but it wasn't bad I'd say it deserves a 7/10 good drop
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http://community.rapbattles.com/showthread.php?t=132793

thanx, I'll take it into consideration, I added a new track too.

Iv updated an ill ass song called "her Story". Its only half finished buts still one of my best shit. check it out.

tru story- what you got so far is tight to me-- i feel the delivery, its got emotion to it- Hook sounds good- shit got heart- its real yamean- you should get into audio battlin on this site we need to bring some more decent audio heads into this site... 1

thanx kid, that means a lot up in here. so far I cant find any more of my new shit. when I do I'll take all that other old shit out and update the right way. I'll start doing audio in about a lil less then a month or so. thanx for the feed back.

your shit was tight, u need to listen to 7, get into some more audio......ur songs are good

whose 7? I listen to niggaz like Chino XL, Canibus, Big Pun, 2Pac, Jadakiss, Nas, Mos Def, Wu-tang, Bizzy Bone, a lot of underground niggaz too. If U say 7 is ill then I'll check em out tho just to see wat he/she/them are/is about. thanx for the words of wisdom, keep em coming. uppin for feedback.

anymore feedback? c'mon I need feed back on my shit to get better. plus if U see this and think im nice, then check out my battles and vote honestly if U can get around to it. I'll vote back in one of Ur battles honestly if U leave a link.

Its getting lonely in this thread....I sure wish I had some feedback to keep me company...