Killah mc Vs BrOtHa-HoOd
 

RULES

10 - 20 lines
u spitt 1st
so hate / crew / dickriding votes
spit due 30 mins afta checkin

rules supposed ta say no hate / crew / dickriding votes not so hate / crew / dickriding votes ...........my bad

aight am checkin in am a spitt wid in the next half hour cos this cat aint seem ta notice that i set this up yet (fool)

gud luk ta killah mc

aight i been experiencin problems wid ma pc it shut down on me n wudnt start back up so i lost all my shit aint no need spittin this mutha fuccaz a no show

am a spitt n e way.....

This cats so dumb he’s trippin ova cordless fone wires,
He aint even started but I suggest he retires

Don’t fuck wid killah mc cos he got genital warts
UK da real ghetto ?…u fulla wack thoughts

Only reason this kids reached 14 is cos his mom cudnt afford an abortion
He got mo diseases than a Ethiopian approach him with caution

Born on the 25 of December don’t start thinking ur Christ
N whipe ur lips this guy just got deepthroated by obie trice

I told this fool ta spit first, but he’s just a herb….
Don’t tell him ta hit the road cos he’ll kick the shit outta the curb

Take it as we wus playin cricket n I wus the ball
I’d play ma finish stump out the wicket n watch this cat fall

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okay u sound kinda good so iam finish with u and now iam a start on ur hood, shoot ya till ur lungs start smokin bitch get off my stage b4 u start chokin cant u see ur fuckin with me i hope to god u know the l.a.p.d. listen up cuz i own the nyc them fucks all no me iam on the front page of the news paper everyday (this kid shot 5 people and now he startin with dre fuck nwa they so retro they only good for givin boy george a b.j. i live in the ghetto thats right son i was born with a gun under the sun wether it was a replica or an unregistered one so i am a win this race wether i beat ya pace by pace or wether i cut ur face...... Yo yo mayne i anit to good cuz i started not so long ago but i try for my age

can we get sum votes in here

drop a vote on this battle plz

uppin votes on this battle........................

this was umm not a good battle
killah your structure and flow was off i couldnt find your punches because it was that bad
structure should be like this
line 1 XXXXXXX
line 2 XXXXXXX
lines should be even to make a good flow

you get what im tryin to say elevate
brotha
it was kinda one sided no doubt you took this one
and least in your verse i could read it good and found the punches

vote/brotha
for overall better everything

ummm yeah if it was up to me killah would lose just on structure... but ill explain it better..

he had no flow, little punches.. and they were weak..

brotha was better in every way... cept for a few stretched lines but thats nothin to complain about..

v/ brotha hood

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opinions r like ass holes, every 1 got 1, now can we get sum opions in here . leave it explained tho, even if u wanna tell me am a wack ass !, just vote

^i already voted on this..........................

aight then man cud u vote on this link then ....

http://community.rapbattles.com/showthread.php?t=133370

uppin votes on this battle, leave ur link n al get back ta ya wid a honest explained vote
thanx

yes..

KillaH:your horrid structure most definatly lost you this battle.. very irritating reading that verse.. and thats most definatly not what you want your readers to be when voting on one of your battles.. find some sort of form and mold you verse to that.. take a look in the elevated front lines or soem of the battles in fornlines and you will find some formats.. choose one and try and emulate it.. shoudlhelp you verse tramendously..\

brotha you came decent.. 6/10 verse.. had some witty punches.. one or two lines were pretty wack tho.. but all around decent..\


v/brotha