Datruth29 Vs. Lyriclesolja
 

aaight lets battle...




No Hatin

Yo i cant believe im battlin this wack cat,
he couldent get a hit if he was bonds holdin a bat,
cause this battle was over before it started he struck out,
ima ko this fool wit three hits spittin through my mouth,
he goin down south,
seein the black light like he was close to death,
the only ill shit he gonna feel if he were to touch the screen and loose his breath,
so come closa and feel the wrath of this solja,
ill roll yo ass up and bring a new meaning to "smoked ya",
so "extra extra everybody read all about it",
hes gonna go brown nose to get votes and i wont allow it.

Hurry up wit ya slow ass....lets get some votes..

I'll strip this bitch, make em freeze naked like playboy models/
In rhymes, this fool couldn't top me if he was a cap n i was a bottle/
you'll get toppled, i dispose of you for raps betterment/
you get mad and I just react and make yo neck twist like excorcists/
let it live, your battle are boring and your style is basic/
all of yo rhymes are "fake", like you got yo lyrics from the matrix/
you can't win, I mean my verse is bound to beat yours/
if not, i hope yo "whack juice" drip n fuck up yo key board/
what do u speak for?, your a question, i'm the answer/
and your style couldn't grow if it were a deadly form cancer/

upping

aight lets get dis wack battle str8

structure - da truth
flow - da truth
personals - none
punchlines - both weak

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take time ta drop a vote on my battles n b4 we start NO HATE VOTES ON MY SHIT

vote at these links

http://community.rapbattles.com/showthread.php?t=133335

http://community.rapbattles.com/showthread.php?t=133370

http://community.rapbattles.com/showthread.php?t=133487

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Lyriclesolja
structure was ok...some of ur lines were just goin everywhere, short and stretched...even that crap out...flow fell off quite a bit...u had a few metas...wordplay was basic...a few of ur punches connected...no good personals...

Datruth29
dont put the /s at the end of ur lines...its gay...but ur structure was pretty good...flow was decent...u had a few metas...wordplay was ok...some of ur punches connected...no good personals...

Overall
both had a few metas...neither had good personals...Datruth29 had the more stable structure...as well as the more consistent flow...on top of that...he had the better wordplay, as well as more connecting punches...so basing off of that...Datruth29 gets my vote...

VOTE - DATRUTH29

PLEASE return the favor with an honest vote on the link in my sig...thanx man...

OK, uppin.......

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up up n away

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