Mimesis vs. Lyriclesolja
 

aight man...

10 lines
no biting/recycling
no hate/crew votes
no feeding
u spit first

good luck...

In...

...ill post my shit after i see that uve dropped...

Yo im battlin this dude whos style is dull,
like a rust hull or an empty skull,
his rhymes are flatter than a shook up coke,
i leave em for broke while im waitin for him to choke,
cause i read you past posts,
you got burned so bad i thought it was a wenie roast,
cause all i saw was neglection,
your words are worse than you moms yeast infection,
i couldent believe it at first sight,
i had to look at it twice then i realized,
nothing in your verses were nice,
so ima see you in hell were i hail,
then beat you over the head wit the mic just for thinkin you had mad skill.

ha ha ha...dont change ur sig or avatar man...thatd be gay...

but anywho...check this shit out....yo, yo...

ur wack as fuck kid...yd u reply...this battle is leavin ya with a lastin scar
cause man...your skills are just movin in circles...just like ur fuckin avatar!
ill blast ya far...cause acceptin this?...this dude has already packed an L
and of course reading sucks...
...cause everyone else understands that ur wack as hell!
ur back to fail...u winnin, not a chance bitch...its time to take the grief in
and fuck ur 4-5 record hoe...
...snappin magnet numbers is the only time ull break even!
for petes sake, just leave man...u know uve lost...ur luck just wont beckon
cause even in his damn sig...
...he just instantly puts his screen name in fuckin second!
ill fuckin deck him...it may not be normal, but dawg...u just suck tonight
so just stop now...cause like ur sig bitch...im just seperatin ur fuckin mic!

peace...

Lyriclesolja
You came very basic. oo basic infact. Try an beefup your lines wit more context. As in punches, personals, and metiphores. Your flo isn't too bad just work on puttin some meat on it. No hate
Mimesi
The opposite for you LOL. Try an jus size the lines down jus a bit and you'll have alot better flow. Other than that, your punches an personals dominated here. Just fix your structure for when you battle more skilled opponents. Nice Job.

Vote/Mimesis

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^^thanx for the vote...

UPPIN # 1 !!!

leave a link and ill return the favor...

Mimesis...hot shit...I will have to say that fo real...you must have been on Original RB for a long time...fo real...your punches was hot...your personals was ill...some of ya lines was stretched though. just tone that down, and hell...you'll fit in right here. Lyriclsoljah...you didn have a hope in hell for you to win this. Your punches were not on the level of Mimesis...niether were ya personals. Flow= Okay.

Vote- Mimesis

No hate.

^^thanx for the vote holmes...

UPPIN # 2 !!!!

leave a link and ill return the favor...

A'yo, you'll return tha favor? Thats tite dawg...all 4 of these been slept on hard...you dont have ta hit em all...even one would be helpfufl...thx bro...

http://community.rapbattles.com/showthread.php?t=131505

http://community.rapbattles.com/showthread.php?t=129842

http://community.rapbattles.com/showthread.php?t=133422

http://community.rapbattles.com/showthread.php?t=132421

ok

lyrisalsolja...very basic...punches weak,verses well short...
only thing u did well was flow and u rhymed apart from that it was very basic...elevate

memesis...
took this easy..u cuda came a lot weaker and still win...
beta structure..although not great
punches were nice and on que....
flow cudve bin beta...
u had multies betas and sum personals
overall nice spit wit gud punches

vote-memesis

aight menisis w/e it is horrible strucutre man jus horrible shit was jus flyin all ova the place.lyricle use complexity in ur punches and flow that sounded real new this wat it sounded like:you are a ho you jus need to go my name aint john doe cause u blow.aight so work on personals and all that jus keep elevated mimesis ok structure was beat up as oj girlfriend but the punches and personals worked well the flow was great but sometimes i got lost in it cause of structure but u kno how it is on here its gota be neat in a real battle though that woulda done perfect its hard to type this stuff on the computer.u had good personals and punches not bad at all

v/mimesis

^^aight..thanx for the votes...

UPPIN # 3 !!!!

leave a link and ill return the favor...

UPPIN # 4 !!!

someone close this ish...

leave a link and ill return the favor...

UPPIN # 5 !!!!

cmon...

...ive voted on tons of battles...

y does no one return the favor?...

In this battle, Lyricle had a better flow, but he lacked creativity and punchlines. Metaphores and punches are the key to text, audio and realtime battles. I did'nt see too many punches on either side but Mimesis had better word play. Lyric was basic and fell of becouse of his lack of imagination. Mime had a terrible flow but took personal shots at his opponent which led him to get my vote for this one.

V/Mimesis

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