(punch battle)DON <VS> Malefic
 

punch battle
2 lines
regular rules
due in 2 minutes
good luck

goldilocks prisons not your fairytail...you couldnt handle the carnage...
youd have to lick papa bears nutes...and at lunch he gets to eat your parage...

This Don plays like Woods'Half the time Under-Par....
He's like cingular wireless....only good for One-Bar-

my bad its sposed to be nuts in my second line i accidently added an e but its sposed to be nuts aight

goldilocks prisons not your fairytail...you couldnt handle the carnage...
youd have to lick papa bears nutes...and at lunch he gets to eat your parage...
It was good because he kept on the same subject on the same bar..

This Don plays like Woods'Half the time Under-Par....
He's like cingular wireless....only good for One-Bar-
Not that nice because the cellphone thing is kinna play'd..a little too simplistic than DON's his also had better vocabulary

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ya, the cellphone thingz a lil played for punch's, and i thought Donz wus pretty good. So i gots to give my vote to Don

v/don

Uppin this. Doesn't take much to vote here. Easy $25 an 1 credit.
Uppin. (1)

DON -

goldilocks prisons not your fairytail...you couldnt handle the carnage...
youd have to lick papa bears nutes...and at lunch he gets to eat your parage...
Overall, bar was pretty good...didnt really like the second line though...punch could have connected more...

Malefic -

This Don plays like Woods'Half the time Under-Par....
He's like cingular wireless....only good for One-Bar-
Overall this was a good bar...wordplay was good...punch connected pretty nicely...

Basing off of that...Malefic came with the better overall bar...he had a better flow...better wordplay...and his punches connected more...

aight this one was easy,i mean there wasn't much to judge on u know. Anyways DON your punch was cool, nothin special though i mean like the above guy said it didnt connect too well.

Mal: Nice punch, but what helped alot was the flow it jus seemed like it fitted together nicely, i dunno how to explain it but u know the flow was on point. liked the Woods line although it might've been played before, it felt like it hadn't. An the second line jus hit harder than DON's, but not by much.

V. Malefic

lol... I've never seen a one bar battle before. Although the wireless thing and 'up to par' shit is play'd, I must admit it made me laugh. But I never saw the goldilocks thing before. But Don's flow was off... And also, malefic had some wordplay... So, my vote goes to Malefic.

tell u the truth. I never knew 1 bar battles were allowed.
I was jus bored myself. DON's idea. Thanks for vote'in. Uppin (2)

actually a lota 1 bar battles happen jus neva wit ur level mostly on elevated wen i battle vets

goldilocks prisons not your fairytail...you couldnt handle the carnage...
youd have to lick papa bears nutes...and at lunch he gets to eat your parage...
^nice punch..good wordplay and good complex rhymes

This Don plays like Woods'Half the time Under-Par....
He's like cingular wireless....only good for One-Bar-
^good bar, iight punch and nice wordplay, a bit too simple tho

don takes this cuz his punch is more complex and i think it hit harder, no hate

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A'ight, looks like a lotta of these battles are poppin' up...I'ma have to start gettin into this....nice werk Don, rep I.I fo real dawg....

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