Limited Edition (I.I) Vs. State Capitol (HWC)
 

A'ight I'm checkin' in this shit......spittin here shortly...

imma spit quickly too...umm how many lines...........

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OOoohhh....low blow wit the pic dawg...haha jp...nice verse...uppin for some votes on this hot shit...

Nice verses all......................

nice battle..heres the breakdown
personals: state i liked eminem twin line, good personal..limited i liked da line bout bein online all day..pretty good personal and punch
punches: state's punches hit a little harder, and they were more on point..limited u had sum nice punches but they didnt hit as hard as state's
flow: limited ur flow was a bit choppy at times and sum lines were shorter then other which fucked up the flow, but it was iight..state i liked ur flow it went well and the lines connected and flowed nicely
wordplay: state i liked da line bout da vet, good wordplay and punch..limited i liked da opener, u had some wordplay on his name that was nice
overall: i gotta give this one to State..betta punches and the personals hit harder, good battle both of u no hate

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uppin this ill return the favour........................................

LE

Fuckin' wit I.I...'Capitol' must be home of tha brave
Afta battle...only 'State' you in...is a bone in a grave...
ok....lol
Think you hot..? You more pussy than the wives of Steprford
You're just not...you're bein' beaten by a loosing record
lol...he has a loosing record?..lol
You have made some wrong choices...start a crew = bad decision
When you on tha computer 24/7...how can you be wit any women?
lol
Hard-wood Clas-sickZ...ill heads, hardley any at all...
"Can' Stop the Unstoppable"...sure...your downward fall... (Sig)
ha ha
Your crew are a bunch of fools...only one crew steps on us...
Why do you say you can win...

...when you've labelled yourself less than us..?lol...

ok this was a good drop..not the best though..your punches could of been harder
personals were ok...overall flow was nice

7/10

SC

^^ aww naww they got me battlin eminem's overweight twin ^^
This Is Easy, all i have to do is pull out a jelly Doughnut To Win
LOOL...funny shit
Spit Flames, set you on fire, leave you with a life-time fever
This wack kid couldn't spit godly even if he was a religious believer
lol...aight
Ok, I Admit, You Cured My Cat, But that doesn't make you a Vet
spits elementary lines, only reason he passed was cuz he was teachers pet
lol..aight
Blas-tin Mags, Body tagged, your corpse left in a plas-tic Bag
your open mic was only half decent 'cause you collabed with mag...
LOOL nice personal
Like The BackStreet Boys, Your Gay Group is coming to an' end
10, how much money on dick enlarger pills did you spend,
ok..not that great of a closer..

ok...i think your punches hit harder than Le by a slight edge.
you had some nice personals in there and again flow was nice..

7.5/10

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Yo i think State got this due to the fact his verse had a better layout than Limited's.

SC: Nice verse dawg i really enjoyed readin ur verse it had some real hard hittin wordplay and the structure was nice too. Also ur punches were on point and were tight as fuck on the metaphor side of things. The rhyme schem was on point too all round a decent verse.

Ltd Edition: A nice verse but i feel u used inapropriate links if u know what i mean. When i 1st read ur verse i found that the links u used in my opinion didnt hit hard enough probably coz SC came back wit sum of his own but it wasnt just that...u were a lil less hard hittn and the wordplay didnt lack but wasnt beating SC.

V/SC

LE - nice spit...u had a basic vocab.....but very nice punches....surprised the fuck outta me....had sum good meta's and ur personals were nice....wordplay was nice and thats wat really helped ur punches...flow was nice too...prolly the best ive seen from u....8.6/10....

State - another nice drop....vcab was basic too...maybe a tiny bit better then his....punches were funny...pic was a nice personal....wordplay was good....personals were good....this was a very close battle....i give ur verse a 8.4/10....

Vote - LE...very nice battle....but LE's punches were harder hitting...good drops by both....

oood battle

State....good punches, nice touch with the pic, it made ya personal you only had one hard. I liked it though cuz its true an its kinda funny points for dat shit, your flow was good, your structure was good, metas coulda been better, but it was a pretty creative verse so I'll give ya 7.5/10

Limited....it seems like you rushed your verse cuz I seen u drop better than that, punches were there but they were weak man, personals were there but they were weak also, flow was a little sloppy but decent, structure I didn't feel at all, vocab was ah'ight, metas needs a lot of work, not your best, give ya 6/10

Vote: State

Le...Nice verse man...Alright...vocab..the sturc was ok...you hit mad hard..Punches..i liked ur verse....u had some great meta..word nice shit man....state..nice verse also..some ok vocab and wordplay...i liked ur sturc....it was...really complec...i think you won just because...u had a lil more wordplay..and...ya punches hit a lil more alright..No Hate...or anythig just honest...iight

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