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*Smile (The Eyes Of A Young African Teenager)*

(Inspired by all my colored friends throughout Winnipeg city)
(title Inspired by the great Tamia (singer)...)

everyday I have a excruciating struggle in life and at school~
I live in a all-white community and discriminating me is the rule~
so once I wake up I put on my eye-liner and my favourite lipstick~
I try to put a *smile* on my face and think of the true politics~
Mr. Mandela, Ms. Parks both overcame the hate in they lives~
pain, anger and other things pile up in my brain's archives~
*school bus comes* I get on and people stare ... Am I different?~
it's like they never saw a African before...Was I born a accident?~
I arrived at school and made my way to physical education~
last pick on a team...no one likes me thats a big complication~
I get shoved to the floor and they calling me a porch monkey~
then call me a illiterate and I say "fuck it" cuz I'm not a monkey~
after that class time went by so quickly then school finally ends~
after this day resided I lost all my remaining goddamn confidence~
that very night I cried myself to sleep in the fuckin' darkness~
in my dreams my mental suffering fades away in evanesce~
while still in my dream I see my ancestors farming on their land~
but than a KKK member came struck them no time to understand~
right before my relative died I swear he looked straight at my face~
and mouthed the words "fight for your rights don't be a disgrace"~
a split second later I woke up.....and inside I contained a lions pride~
and I shouted " respect my entire race let that be known worldwide~

^^^wow I put emotion in there so I need no hate............................
and to all the white people on this site don't take this offensive.........
I wasn't saying that all white people are like that I know there
are nice people of that race & I respect that and if you do take
that offensively Im sorry for the misunderstanding.......................

and people note I'm not African/Jamaican...........
and also this was made because I wanted to do a topical on this
and I wrote this right now since no one will accept my bitchslapped
threads at all............................................... ...............