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10 Lines Minimum (5 Bars)
20 Lines Maximum (10 Bars) Both start spittin when "Both" Checked in.. Verse(s) due 20-25 Minutes There after.. "Checked In".. |
yo im checked in son
so hur up so we can get this shit jumped off |
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aight, lets get this shit commenced n get ready to go..
"Checked In" |
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Trip F-50 bout to gear in hit// aint a kid from Boston whos a real Lyricist
Bitch go "Bong a dick" // I don' breed cock to get high n jus take hits from it You gave a spit // it missed // pussy is the only thing that can drench my lips Yo "Pussy" jus is pissed //makin yo gravestone read "Too dissed to be missed" You rep coward when i bust out white "Flour" // i distance from cowards Hit the wrong 9/11 Tower // seen more "thug" from fagats reppin white power Migrated n jus Flew In // this kid thinks like that wit me a win is a Shoe in "72" it was the year of the Boston Bruins // 0 Stanley cups later whos ruin-ed Bitch are you stupid // softer than cupid mind yo matters n put yo screw in Don be black jus cus its yo "June-Skin" // lookin like pluto jus wit no spits.. 10 lines, peace |
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Its been close to a hour homie, where you at writing a book n perfectin it, hurry the fuck up or sit the fuck down, peace
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Battle Closed...
Someone close this battle, this cat has taken over a hour n a half now n it needs to be closed, peace...
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im tired of facin the cats thats weak and cant spit//
when i stick my foot out is when this lil one trip// boston the only thing you got to go on the rest is played// like mj's last game for the bulls -sorry russell you've jus been jayed//(bulls last championship) lyrically assasinate you like they did pres.. kennedy// you aint gone last through this shit like matrix did trininty// readin my shit turn you blind have you wit a hadicap sticker// you could only eat my bars if they was hershey and snickers// its a shame your check in was bettah than your post// i make you disapear like AJ did as host//(106 & park) no need for me to kill ya you shot ya self// you need to go to the top of ya screen and click on help// this is easy like a todler vs a grown man in chest// boston been ill since pam lee had fake breast// i talk to you youngin like ya pop does is only son// your not cut out for this kiddow pick another proffesion// you wasted my time and ryhme son your worthless// it took you so long to respond cause your computer deleted it on purpose// this shit is over you can e-mail me your white flag// i just look at and say ooooooooow weee like an expensive tab// thats enough.... some one come get em... |
damn boston merked dis nigga..better vocab, flow and punches
lil-trip ur structure was fucked up a little and ur punches werent hittin hard, elevate son v/boston, i liked the flow and hard hittin punches return the favor wit votes on the battle in my sig |
i aint feelin none yall but i think lil trip got this one boston dawg u didnt come hard enough to take this battle flow and punches go to lil trip vocab boston got it the rest like structure trip got it i think because he had hard hittin punches and they landed
v/trip |
Flow = Tip
Metas = Boston Punches = Both Personals = Both But i Liked Bostons More Overall = Boston Vote = Boston http://community.rapbattles.com/showthread.php?t=134161 -eB |
this shit was cool homie from home held it down ugly here though.
Boston reps 2 da full respect dat. Trip i disagree wit your first line too cuzz. Ain't a kid from Boston who ain't a real lyracist. Don't get it twisted baby. But yo your verse was cool homie just ate it up though. Lyracist good shit dog. Nice metas and shit up in your verse I was feelin it. Hold it down like we spost to. vote=Bean Lyracist |
man, lil trip's structure was all fucked up, his flow was aight, his punches were somewhat weak
was feelin bostons structure more, had better flow, better punches, came decent enough to take trip my vote goes to boston return the favor here, dont vote against me tho just cuz i voted against you that shit happens often http://community.rapbattles.com/showthread.php?t=134795 |
Hey man I gots to give this one to...........
-Lil; Trip u gots to work on yo structure dagg I could'nt hardly get yo shit, I had to read it 3 times Yo vocabulary was up there I liked that and flow was ok but not enough punches 7/10 -Boston nice verse but u could up yo vocabulary a little more U had good structure and nice punchlines Yo flow I was feelin also nice rhymes 8.5/10 v/ Boston |
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