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SPuL™ 07-05-04 10:57 PM

BluePrint v.s A.I.-SPuL v.s Hypnotic
 
rules we agreed on:

2 minute max of spittin'. Can let the beat run longer if want. I'm gonna let it run till 2:30, but I'm spittin' from :20 to 1:50

house rules on votin'

I'll drop ASAP

good luck.

Sir Cedrych 07-07-04 06:46 PM

mmkay check in damn............................................

Key... 07-09-04 07:19 PM

When dis due?

Sir Cedrych 07-10-04 12:30 PM

the verses will be due on the 13th of june

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SPuL™ 07-10-04 12:52 PM

July 13th?

the god of rap 07-15-04 12:49 PM

psychotic hypnotic product gotta take an antibiotic
aint nobody hotta um..so ona yata yata
god i talk alotta humm diddly atta atta
oochie walla walla um dadidliada but u gotta gotta

DaDemorcrate 07-15-04 03:16 PM

.................................................. ..did ya'll battle or not?

Key... 07-15-04 09:42 PM

They still didnt drop.

Sir Cedrych 07-16-04 07:57 AM

we both agreed to drop on today as in friday so therefore im droppin today

SPuL™ 07-16-04 10:45 AM

^yup. Here's my verse.

www.soundclick.com/spul

Yea, only had 5 mins to spit it, but it's still ok. :)

Lyrics:

You copy sayings from a singer... a fuckin' hoe
I'll knock you out so fast, you will have to go "Whoa!"
Dissin' my flow... man, don't even blow
Cuz on AOL you go... "man, good job on flow"
Tryin' to find flaws in my verse... lay off the crack
Hey, Bush... no bombs in my Iraq!!!
Skills you lack, so you left because you're wack
Went to hit the sack, next day, this bitch is back
Yea, I listened to yo audio... no punches flyin'
Cuz you're only used to makin' a punch, if it's Hawaiian
Man, I ain't fuckin' lyin', yo flow is always dyin'
Except in 3 minutes... when you're fuckin' cryin'
I'ma tie you up like cattle, even though it's my first battle
Like Pedro in Game 7, man, you're fuckin' rattled
Your closers all suck, like yo mom wit yo dick
But you couldn't close it up, even if you was a stitch
I could merk you, bitch, in audio or text
Man, you're such a pest, I thought you fuckin' left?
But soon I'll make you jet, like a motherfuckin' lexus
Have yo ass goin', from Michigan down to Texas
You don't wann mess this, cuz I'm so Reckless
Have yo ass chokin', like yo neck, from yo necklace
Yo rhymes aren't where you left it, where the fuck you kept it?
Then again yo rhymes suck, it's like you hexed it
But dude, you're not alone... you got a crew
People who can't rap, and suck at everything they do
Rhymes are never tru, get ready to feel blue
Cuz you're gonna fuckin' cry, after it's 0-5 you
Have a fucked up name Hypnotic, yo rhymes, I jus stepped on it
Flow like solid magma, I guess yo flows plutonic
Yo rhymes suck dick, Jacko must be yo mother
Can't believe the sperm that made you, beat 1 million others
We kno that you stink, but it's yo beef that is smelly
Cuz you got more fuckin' beef, than Fat Joe, in his belly
Yo ego is so large, it looks like it got a tumor
You are livin' proof, that God has a sense of humor


Yea, also, when you go to my SC, please check out Shady Gangsta beat and vote it hot. :cool: lol need to move up the charts.

The Jett 07-16-04 11:12 AM

^I expected more from a fellow bostonian.....
it's alright. you'll elevate quick jus like u did in text.

Lotta Boston people on this site isn't there?
-I'll drop a vote when Hypnotic drops-

Just drop a vote on my Battle when Soulless drops.pc-1

Key... 07-16-04 12:47 PM

Bostonian..lol

Sir Cedrych 07-16-04 01:16 PM

http://www.soundclick.com/bands/7/h...attlezmusic.htm

vs. spul

lol at spul posting his lyrics
u shouldnt post ur lyrics, we should get them in ur audio
if not then blah...

The Jett 07-16-04 01:43 PM

Quote:
Originally Posted by DeadlyVision
Bostonian..lol
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yeh bostonian...dunno why that's lol. but any ways-

Spul. The beat was OK. It's just throwin on the pretty played side of thing's. The fact its used so many time's kinda kill's the creativity because you really can't flow to it any differant than any one else has already. Your lyrics where good. the delivery is what lacked. The volume was a tad too low. Work on the audio aspect a lil more and you'll be ok.
5/10
Hypnotic. That wouldn't be a beat I would have used but it worked well for you. You fit it nice'ly. Your style,flow,and delivery were good also. Your lyrics were equally as good as Spul's. The only differance was you covered the audio aspect much better. Nice drop. Hope to battle you some time.
7/10

No Hate. Vote Hypnotic

Drop a vote on my Battle wit Soulless when he drops tonight. -1

SPuL™ 07-16-04 02:18 PM

Quote:
Originally Posted by Hypnotic
http://www.soundclick.com/bands/7/h...attlezmusic.htm

vs. spul

lol at spul posting his lyrics
u shouldnt post ur lyrics, we should get them in ur audio
if not then blah...

yea, I asked you on AIM if I could post it, and you said "k". But whatever, uppin'.


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