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e-dubz vs mixtape
iight a punch battle, 4 lines
no hate crew or d/r votes, no feedin u need 100 posts to vote on this imma drop now, since u offline drop tomoro mornin goodluck |
its like beatin my dick for ‘glory’ another ‘win’ im cummin to collect
battlin me is a subliminal message..... that your gunnin fo respect my fans are namin me a ‘bug’ killer.... the way i take out the ‘pest’ treatin this nigga like a ‘vampire’ i put a lyrical ‘stake’ thru yo chest |
Ayo E-Dubz "im dope as hell" then not even 1 percent of BEST in your rhymes...
What ya hope to sell? must think im blind in the ear and deff in the eyes... You a mild threat, play this never be,like chemistry and disect your dialect... De-mented,ugly,fatal,devestating when this child rep,tried to test the wild vet... |
E-Dubz
its like beatin my dick for ‘glory’ another ‘win’ im cummin to collect battlin me is a subliminal message..... that your gunnin fo respect seem'd a lil self hype. no punch at Mix. 5/10 my fans are namin me a ‘bug’ killer.... the way i take out the ‘pest’ treatin this nigga like a ‘vampire’ i put a lyrical ‘stake’ thru yo chest I always see these "lyrical weapons"....no personals 4/10 Your flo was on Key. I was feelin that, just the punches. The one. Wasn't even direct...It could have been used on me. No hate. Jus tryna help. Be more personal 9/20 Mixtape Ayo E-Dubz "im dope as hell" then not even 1 percent of BEST in your rhymes... What ya hope to sell? must think im blind in the ear and deff in the eyes... This was OK. nothing special 5/10 You a mild threat, play this never be,like chemistry and disect your dialect... De-mented,ugly,fatal,devestating when this child rep,tried to test the wild vet... sik multi's. all in correct context.nice. good punch. 7/10 Not very personal either but what made your's a little different was your last bar. you had very nice flo with a good use of multi's. Again use personal punches. It'll help. Nice Job. 12/20 Vote/mixtape Nice from both of you tho. Please hit up my Punch Battle wit DON in my sig wit an honest vote. Thanks. |
^u dont got 100 posts..cant u read, anyway uppin
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e-dubz:
its like beatin my dick for ‘glory’ another ‘win’ im cummin to collect battlin me is a subliminal message..... that your gunnin fo respect good flow good structure good punch good wordplay 8.5/10 my fans are namin me a ‘bug’ killer.... the way i take out the ‘pest’ treatin this nigga like a ‘vampire’ i put a lyrical ‘stake’ thru yo chest first line played..second line was also played but good 7.6/10 mixtape: Ayo E-Dubz "im dope as hell" then not even 1 percent of BEST in your rhymes... What ya hope to sell? must think im blind in the ear and deff in the eyes... i wasnt feelin this line that much 1st line you glorified yourself its not good to do that with only 4 lines... 6.8/10 You a mild threat, play this never be,like chemistry and disect your dialect... De-mented,ugly,fatal,devestating when this child rep,tried to test the wild vet... good flow..good adjectives lol....umm this was better ..some confusing but i could understand it 8.5/10 vote: e-dubz no hate i have mad respect for you both mixtape you would of got this if you didnt glorify yourself in the first line and if the second line hit harder and e-dubz your last line was played but you still won this because of consistancy |
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Dayum both of those was some hot punchlines...and I was feelin edubz...until I seen the last line of Mixtape...had maad multis in it...It was really hot and ended his shit off nicely. I thought Mixtape was tryin to throw some personals in there too...so that was an added bonus.
no hate...both of these shits was hot and it came right down to the end to give ti to mixtape. |
uppin fo votes..
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vote mix tape for the hardest punch in one line
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e-dubz its like beatin my dick for ‘glory’ another ‘win’ im cummin to collect lol...decent battlin me is a subliminal message..... that your gunnin fo respect Good ..but as stated played my fans are namin me a ‘bug’ killer.... the way i take out the ‘pest’ naw wasnt feelin that treatin this nigga like a ‘vampire’ i put a lyrical ‘stake’ thru yo chest iight nice flow... decent punclines overall:10/20 Vote=mixtape no hate Ayo E-Dubz "im dope as hell" then not even 1 percent of BEST in your rhymes... decent What ya hope to sell? must think im blind in the ear and deff in the eyes... Lol..nice flow.. You a mild threat, play this never be,like chemistry and disect your dialect... damn nice punchlines De-mented,ugly,fatal,devestating when this child rep,tried to test the wild vet... [b]lol...decent punchlines overall :11.5/10 |
close battle...e-dubz you had a nice flow and consistency, but mixtape just came with the punches he brought his "A" game to this one.. best punch wasYou a mild threat, play this never be,like chemistry and disect your dialect...De-mented,ugly,fatal,devestating when this child rep,tried to test the wild vet..i was def feelin that...sorry dubz i was just feelin the flow.
vote mixtape. |
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