BrOtHa-HoOd Vs Fuse
 

rules

u spitt 1st
10 - 20 lines
no d/r
no hate
no crew votes

check in n spitt

O.K. here i go.


i put a condom on your spine and say it was a back rubber.//
I eat dis kid like he was red ridin hoods grandmother.//
Other than wack rapper your a follow and lead.//
the reason you dont battle is cause i got your armie to fle.//
you can be blind and i'll still tell you watch and you'll see.//
you die by a dragon like playin parts fa Bruse Lee.//
I'm so raw you read books thinkin i was a myth.//
murder this kid like he was aliens and i was will smith.//
where not cool your still on my hitlist.//
knock your front teeth out for you can have somethin to wish for, for christmas.//
Cryin cause you know you cant beat me so stop throughin a fit.//
the reason you got that picture on ya page is cause its showin what you cant get.//
dont think i cant beat you cause you know that i can.//
i chop ya dick off to make you less of a man.//

sorry bout tha delay i been out doin work, am a check in n spitt shortly

This fool must of blown a fuse, his games turned off,
Am a take a piece outta him n leave him lookin like Vincent van gough /

If fuse wus stretch-arm-strong his punches wouldn’t even h connect,
Im a cut ur flow apart like its mine to dissect /

All u spitt bout is tha movies, u luk like tha main role in shrek
Life aint a movie son u need a reality check

Ur obsessed wid dicks man ur perveted
Ma rhymes leaving votes on ur shit almost deserted

Som peeps say beefs bad but I think the worst is hate
But u a close third wid ur flows tryna impersonate

This kid lives on the net, in real life he don’t shine,
If there wus a rap law, on the first bar he’d b doin 3 – 9 /

This kid just got sentenced for all the mistakes in his verse
I got ur perfect movie role, walkin the green mile n comin out in a herse /

I made this like a cake that’s about ta get sugar coated,
All u do is bitch like a rent boy who bout ta get deepthroated /

U gosta admit my punches hit harder like the hamer from thaw (Viking god)
U came inta this community got burnt n I jus pushed u out the fire exit door /

eplanations

the green mile is a movie. its also what u walk on deathrown wen ur going to the chair

in my 5th bar i say he impersonates, cos in his spitts he always says he IS otha ppl

dissect = cuttin thangs up inta lil bits to examen them
vincent van goghs name is pronunced gof, + he cut his ear off so he wus disfugured

this seems like a close battle can we now have sum votes in here. stop sleeping on it n start voting on it

Fuse I was feelin a lot of ya verse...but you had a lot of streched lines, esp when you got to the end. That really hurt ya flow, and ya didnt end it too well either...A few good punches and some nice metas though.

Brotha you had a nice structure broken down into bars...you also though had some streched lines though. Ya flow wasnt as bad as his wasm but jeep the structure tight as it helps ya flow. I thought brotha came with a few harder punches, and he marginally wins the battle.

v/Brotha

Fuse, you had a verse that you could have directed to anyone. Not many personals in there. You coulda talked about his name, the fact hes from LA, ..etc. However I liked it cuz you had a good structure that was easy to follow. But, BH beat you with the better structure. He also had punches that were hitting pretty hard. So, Imma have ta give it to BH.

Vote - Brotha hood

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Fuse - Verse was iight. Couple of ya lines was stretched but ya had nice punches. The closer was kinda weak but overall ya did ur job. 6.5/10

Brotha Hood - Yo verse was lackin a little lyrically. Yo shit was kinda confusin cuz some of yo shit didn't make sense. And some didn't rhyme. Keep elevatin. 4/10

Vote - Fuse
Yo return tha favor on tha real.
Me vs. Genocide

Bruda Hood Won This In Every Catagory If U Wuz Gon Ask Me , Strukcha,flow,punches The Lot, While I Didnt Quite Feel Fuse Verse

punches-Hood
personals-maybe Hood for his 5th bar...but neither really
Structure-Hood...whoever said u had stretched lines should be shot..fuse ur bar length was changin too much
Meta's-Hood
Flow-meh...Fuse

Overall-Hood...punches were better, better consistancy and it had better vocab and creativity to me...

hit up this battle of mine with an honest vote...peace good battle
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