State CapiTol Vs Apo
 

10-16 lines
drop by thurs
no crew votes
or u D/R friends

dont diss my fake picture either. :)

chek the fuk in.

umm make this due by 12 am tonight..no one needs 2 days to drop a 0-16 line verse

im busy 2nite and 2moro............................................. ...

fuck bring your raps with you where ever the hell your going i cant take the risk of you pre writting like hell.........

omg........ok i have some time 2 write before i go out..................fuk ur life is too focused on RB kid, get off ur pc for once......now dont reply with anything but ur verse, theres 2 many pointless posts here already...........o yeh and drop before me :)

lol at kids bouncin appearing invisible as soon as I ask em 2 drop

http://www.bitch-0.nl/upload/images/Picture%20115.jpg
Kid got a retard fam, that abuses him daily,
& he sucked so many dummies. . . . . . . . .
. . . . . . . . . . . .he got the nick name baby.
Saw his scrawny picture . . . doubt ya arms cud even push me?
And ya face is gods gift to women. . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . .
. . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . .who think they got an ugly pussy.
This BOY is so fuckin weak. . .16 lines gives him intense stress,
Coz he finds it hard to put up one bar. . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . .
. . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . .like his max bench.
SC is a known homo. . . .and that faggot really does want me :(
& trust me I don’t mean geographically. . . . . . . . . . . . . . . .
. . . . . . . . . . . . .. . . . . . . . .when I say Capitol is in Country. :hump:
Kid tries to claim he is ghetto. . .with 60 posts a day I doubt u should,
Because only when ur hidin ur dirty face. . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . .
. . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . .are you in a hood.
This nigga be so skinny. . . measuring 20 inches in the middle,
& tell ya social life to copy your penis’ life. . . . . . . . . . . . . . .
. . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . .and start to live a little.
Already I got this could shook . . . . scared when im gonna drop mine,
& face it this geek will never be off the hook, off the chain. . . . . . . .
. . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . .or even offline.
Punches dopeness and talent. . . . all what I just said you lack son,
& like bodies my structure adapts to what it deals with . . . . . . . .
. . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . .so I used a wack one.

Wack Is The Hypothesis that describes Apothesis..
Inflict more pain in your chest then your Nipple Peircings,
..................your lines only make me pause-a-bit..
Refuse to call Apoth wack, cause his sig states the fact..
Subtract, all the "...." and your lines are more stretched,
................................then michael jacksons ass crack..
(NEVER DROP THE SOAP GentleMEN!)

Dumbass Claims I have no Life and Im Alwayz On RB,
......................But his post count is Greater then mine..
Your going no where in the rap game, i'd move forwards,
............................. faster then you pressing rewind..
Looks are deceiving, claims he's a big cat,
...............................but he's gettin merked by lattin kitten..
This Useless Source of life eliminates the word,
................................."Great" out of Brittain..
Your Vocab Doesn't fool me a slight bit,
......put down the dictionary for dummies.. (say no to drugs!)
Cause The only time your accually intelligent,
......................Is when your battling mummies..
Apoth's Beyond Horrible,
.......so bad he even got rejected from WB Superstar USA..
His Dad Came back from vacation So now he can go back to,
...................."AWWW YEAH IM GETTIN DICK TODAY!!!!"..
He regreats battlin me now him and the bum,
..........are on the corner of the street with :help: signs..
apoth's far from creative, he had his Wack verse ready,
..........................before computers were even designed..
You know foreign parents are strict these days,
.....so he had to drop his verse an hour before his curfue..
Ill Fu,
...............Hold on, someone's here to see you


http://www.bitch-0.nl/upload/images/fat_girl.jpg

ROFL READ THIS AFTER YOU'VE SEEN THAT PIC

whooooo CLose battle

Apotheosis-Close battle, I mean this was close...You came
aight and you had everything and you had a lil bit of metaphores
and similies and punches was there
8/10

State Capital-That pic with the lady killed it though..But
you had was good to and I think you had like 2 lines that
was gooder then his which was like the lady one and probably
michael Jackson, So

8.1/10
v/State Capital

Mah bad Apotheosis Yall both My Homies

state capitol
Wack Is The Hypothesis that describes Apothesis..
Inflict more pain in your chest then your Nipple Peircings,
..................your lines only make me pause-a-bit..
Refuse to call Apoth wack, cause his sig states the fact..
Subtract, all the "...." and your lines are more stretched,
................................then michael jacksons ass crack..
GOOD PUNCHES BUT CHOPPY FLOW 7/10
Dumbass Claims I have no Life and Im Alwayz On RB,
......................But his post count is Greater then mine..
Your going no where in the rap game, i'd move forwards,
............................. faster then you pressing rewind..
Looks are deceiving, claims he's a big cat,
...............................but he's gettin merked by lattin kitten..
This Useless Source of life eliminates the word,
................................."Great" out of Brittain..
GOOD PUNCHES WORDPLAY AND PERSONAL 9/10
Your Vocab Doesn't fool me a slight bit,
......put down the dictionary for dummies.. (say no to drugs!)
Cause The only time your accually intelligent,
......................Is when your battling mummies..
Apoth's Beyond Horrible,
.......so bad he even got rejected from WB Superstar USA..
His Dad Came back from vacation So now he can go back to,
...................."AWWW YEAH IM GETTIN DICK TODAY!!!!"..
He regreats battlin me now him and the bum,
..........are on the corner of the street with signs..
apoth's far from creative, he had his Wack verse ready,
..........................before computers were even designed..
You know foreign parents are strict these days,
.....so he had to drop his verse an hour before his curfue..
Ill Fu,
...............Hold on, someone's here to see you
GOOD PUNCHES BUT ONCE AGAIN CHOPPY FLOW AND BAD STRUCUTRE 7/10
OVERALL 21-30 NICE DROP
Kid got a retard fam, that abuses him daily,
& he sucked so many dummies. . . . . . . . .
. . . . . . . . . . . .he got the nick name baby.
Saw his scrawny picture . . . doubt ya arms cud even push me?

And ya face is gods gift to women. . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . .
. . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . .who think they got an ugly pussy.
This BOY is so fuckin weak. . .16 lines gives him intense stress,
Coz he finds it hard to put up one bar. . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . .
. . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . .like his max bench.
NO HERES WHERE WE OCCUR TROUBLE U USED THAT PUSSY LINE INANOTHER BATTLE
6/10 FOR RECYCLING
SC is a known homo. . . .and that faggot really does want me
& trust me I don’t mean geographically. . . . . . . . . . . . . . . .
. . . . . . . . . . . . .. . . . . . . . .when I say Capitol is in Country.
Kid tries to claim he is ghetto. . .with 60 posts a day I doubt u should,
Because only when ur hidin ur dirty face. . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . .
. . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . .are you in a hood.
This nigga be so skinny. . . measuring 20 inches in the middle,
& tell ya social life to copy your penis’ life. . . . . . . . . . . . . . .
. . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . .and start to live a little.
GOOD PUNCHES GOOD FLOW 9/10
Already I got this could shook . . . . scared when im gonna drop mine,
& face it this geek will never be off the hook, off the chain. . . . . . . .
. . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . .or even offline.
Punches dopeness and talent. . . . all what I just said you lack son,
& like bodies my structure adapts to what it deals with . . . . . . . .
. . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . .so I used a wack one.
GOOD PUNCH BAD FLOW 7/10
20/30 UR RECYCLING THAT PUSSY LINE RUINED UR VERSE IT LACKED ORIGINALITY
MY VOTE: STATE CAPITOL

recycling is very bad apoth ..........................

Wasn't feeling this battle much

Apo...weak verse overall, you had weak punches, an your personals were weak, your flow coulda been better, structure wasn't good, metas wasn't present; multies none were in siight, you jus had one good punch an the was the max bench punch, that was funny an I give ya props for dat but the rest was sad man, I giva ya 5/10

State...not much difference weak verse, punches were weak, jus like him you had just one good one the you take the great out britain shit was nice, that was whole battle highlight, now your closer I don't think its a good idea to scare the shit out of people u vote for but I got it, an it was ok not impressive tho, your metas were ok, that michael jackson line gotta go that was wack, but flow was good, but that structure I hate so I didn't like it, but overall u got a 5.5/10
It came down to 1 punchline for my vote cuz both verse only had one line an state's one line was stronger
Vote: state

Apotheosis-Close battle, You came aight and you had some good pucnehs.....personals wasnt really that good like states was......your metas was okay and similies was there

State Capital-this was as good verse.....you killed dat nigga wit the pic man......ROFL your punches was sick and your personals was even better.....they hit hardcore and they stuck good......didnt really like the structure though so work on that shit man

v/State Capital

this was an iight battle..the flow was off from both of u, state had some nice punches and personals, i like the style he wrote in

This Useless Source of life eliminates the word,
................................."Great" out of Brittain..
^i liked that bar, good wordplay and a nice personal

apo..ur flow was a little better then his but ur punches didnt hit as hard

Kid tries to claim he is ghetto. . .with 60 posts a day I doubt u should,
Because only when ur hidin ur dirty face. . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . .
. . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . .are you in a hood.
^i liked that bar, nice personal and it was funny

overall state had better punches and personals and thats wut text battles r about
apo had a better flow but it doesnt outweigh the punches

return the favor wit honest votes on the battles in my sig