e-dubz vs killa cam
 

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son iam ready spit ,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,.................. ..............................................

E never hesitates i'll be the first to clap at yo dome
you must be retarted, comin at me lackin a chrome*
cam wasnt made for this, sorry but your talent is too minimal
you couldnt make a ‘point’ if your whole verse was in ‘decimal’
i will ‘precisely forecast’ ur loss like a ‘clever weather man’
name ur punches ‘Peter Pan’ cuz they ‘never never land’
like him ur living in a fantasy land this attack was never planned
im beating you hands down like im writing in a hand stand
ur unwanted like paparazzi grief, and hated like a Nazi chief
only time you ‘came in style’ was ejaculatin in ur Versace briefs

*if ur retarded ur lacking a chromosome..

its been 25 mins since u checked in..spit fam

this nigga anit shit he just talk shit
came out his mama ass and he still a bitch
you ether get down or you ether lay down
crenshaw a cross the chest i cant be put to rest
iam the best and you anit shit
your rhymes cant comper to mine even on my worst day
so you better back down before you get clapped clown
i not playin with this fagott ass hoe now
gust what you is a thick ass bitch so go eat a mufuckin click
i smell pussy is that you bitch it must be because they say you are what you eat pussy

open fo votes..

-Edubz.
E never hesitates i'll be the first to clap at yo dome
you must be retarted, comin at me lackin a chrome*
coo flow, like the multi, coo wordplay, straight punch
cam wasnt made for this, sorry but your talent is too minimal
you couldnt make a ‘point’ if your whole verse was in ‘decimal’
average flow, coo wordplay, played out punch
i will ‘precisely forecast’ ur loss like a ‘clever weather man’
name ur punches ‘Peter Pan’ cuz they ‘never never land’
good flow with the multi, good wordplay, aight punch, Warbux used this awhile ago though cus
like him ur living in a fantasy land this attack was never planned
im beating you hands down like im writing in a hand stand
average flow, decent wordplay, aight punch, using the same word twice like hand wrecks the wittiness of the line
ur unwanted like paparazzi grief, and hated like a Nazi chief
only time you ‘came in style’ was ejaculatin in ur Versace briefs
good flow, liked the multi, decent wordplay, cum lines are the most played lines next to defeat ones


-Killacam.
this nigga anit shit he just talk shit
came out his mama ass and he still a bitch
average flow, weak wordplay, no punch
you ether get down or you ether lay down
crenshaw a cross the chest i cant be put to rest
odd/bad flow, no wordplay, no punch
iam the best and you anit shit
your rhymes cant comper to mine even on my worst day
no flow, aight wordplay, i've seen this line/idea 5 times this week in the Front Lines
so you better back down before you get clapped clown
i not playin with this fagott ass hoe now
average flow, no wordplay, no punch
gust what you is a thick ass bitch so go eat a mufuckin click
i smell pussy is that you bitch it must be because they say you are what you eat pussy
no flow, weak wordplay, can't use the same word in a bar, the idea is played to death


Overall, Dub got this. He had punches, wordplay, and flow. Dub, work on setting up your punches instead of trying to cram three into two lines, & your creativity. Everything else is straight. Cam, form punchlines, work on your creativity, work on flowing two lines together, use wordplay, and try and make your lines similar in length, but not long like your last line.


Vote - Edubz.

killa cam i need people to vote so come on and vote dipset 1 :thumbup:

Vote=E-Dubz

Nice voerse from him.He had better punches that killa.I liked that Peter Pan line.Killa Cam,you need to work on your structure and come with some harder punches.Those punches was weak compared to E-dubz.You also need to work on your flow more.E-Dubz murked ya.Work on ya spits killa.Nice verse E-Dubz.

I'll post my poll when somebody hits my battle up.

uppin fo votes

dubz u merked this cat... better punches and flow.. and the whole deal.. so my vote goes to dubz

This Was A Good Battle. But I Feel That E Dubz Had The Better Flow Cuz Of Killas Structure Was All Fucked Up, And E Also Used More Mettas, And Was Hittin Harder On The Punches But I Dont Have 20 Posts Yet But If I Had 2 Votes Id Say E Dubz

uppin..

E-dubz came with some nice metas...dude said someone else used the never never land punch...but I aint never heard it so I liked it lol.

Flow was pretty decent for e-dubz, structure was pretty nice also. Killa cam ya flow and shit was off cause your lines were gettin more and more streched as ya verse went on. Need to get the structure a lil tighter, count syllables itll help ya flow.

Some nice metas from E-dubz, wasnt really feelin too much from killa cam, both of yall started out kinda weak, e-dubz a lil better than killa cam though. I liked the point and decimal rhyme dubz that was nice.

A little more creativity from the verse of e-dubz...not so much from killa cam. Decent battle though, but the win goes to E-dubz

v/e-dubz

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