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QBsmasher 07-06-04 04:43 PM

QBsmasher vs GEE
 
Aight 10 lines

You know the rules
N/hate, crew, dr, feeding, biting

Both verses due in 30 min

QBsmasher 07-06-04 05:08 PM

Battles are so hot, just reading them helps you "burn" calories
Help put you on a "losing" diet, and adjust you to the formalities
I wrap(rap) around the "poll" like tetherball
After the first punch, the ball never stalls
Your similar to Sugar free Kool-Aid, just one mix and your done
Who forgot the additives, with no preservatives, you begin to run
No difference in K-nines, and his shaggy ass,
Ill KO his rhymes, vote on it and get 25 cash
He jokes too much about moms, let me end this qualm, 1 more line
If i duck taped ya mouth to psalms, you still couldnt spit rhymes

G 07-06-04 05:29 PM

QB, I'm sackin you..and askin fa more/
this doo couldnt smash me if i was a bug on the floor.
Why'd you even challenge me man, this is my duel/
you couldnt smash girls if you were a QuarterBack in high school!
He aint from Queensbridge, however his name is QB/
probably stands for Quiet Bitch, cuz he scared ta talk to me.
Then again...maybe you are a QuarterBack from Queensbridge/
too bad you didnt get a deal, like Nasty Nas did.
QB's the QuarterBack and I'm a lineman, killin you with cursed raided blitz/
Leave him with injuries with mah lyrics, benchwarmers bring out the first aid kits.

G 07-06-04 06:17 PM

Good shit, Good battle...No hate at all..
-Uppin for Votes...

QBsmasher 07-06-04 07:27 PM

good battle here...lets get some votes in...

BZ No Mercy 07-06-04 07:32 PM

QB- Nice flow, structure.. Your similar to Sugar free Kool-Aid, just one mix and your done
Who forgot the additives, with no preservatives, you begin to run, I liked that.

Gee- Why'd you even challenge me man, this is my duel/
you couldnt smash girls if you were a QuarterBack in high school! I thought that was a pretty nice line.

I'm gonna have to give the win to QB, he had better lines, but it was close.

N.Tavarez 07-06-04 08:23 PM

Qb Got This One Even Though It Was Close. I Like Gee's Verse, But The Punchlines Got Me To Vote For Qb

Blimp 07-06-04 09:05 PM

qb u won from beginning 2 end i really wasn't feelin Gee flo it was plain and borin usin da name qb 2 much instead of actually showin ya true skills need 2 elevate

v/ qb

QBsmasher 07-06-04 10:08 PM

Uppin for more votes....good battle here

G 07-07-04 12:04 AM

Uppin fa votes..even if I kinda lost this one already...

SONIC 07-07-04 12:17 PM

Ok.. QB

first bar...
was pretty tight.. I like the meta in the first line and the second was cool...
second..
nice, nice, the balls never stalls thing was ill...
3rd..
i liked the first line
4th.. n
nothing special.. so, so
5th bar..
again, it was clever, but nothing that special..

GEE..
1rst bar
whack set up and basic punch
2nd
again.. basic punch and similar to the first
3rd..
scared to talk to you? wierd
4th..
u played off of his name again, for that you lost..
and lack of punches, and meta's..

v/QB

Recluse 07-07-04 12:21 PM

this was a good battle but i forgot i can't vote cuz of a bitch in this battle *cough*ravage*cough*aka QBsmasher

Ca'lam 07-07-04 01:26 PM

lol.. nice punches guys..

i liked the way you guys kept it simple.. ok the breakdown

QB: i liked the way you had some nicce punches at the very start of your verse.. i was feelin em.. towards the end you started to "stall" just a little bit.. but it was a decent verse overall...

GEE:iv got to say, if all of your punches hit as hard as your first bar did, this battle would have been easily yours.. that line was pretty tight.. even tho i heard it before, it was still a nice play off of his name.. prolly the best personal in this battle.. but that was your hardest line.. after that it got kinda boring because you didnt change the subject.. you were on his name to much, or maybe it was just the personals you were trying to pull off werent hitting..

to me this battle was QB's.. Gee id say you need to hit and move on, dont try and hit on the same stuff to much or you will lose the readers interests.. which is very bad

v/QB


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