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BZ No Mercy vs femcee
no crew, no hate, no d/r, no essays, no line limit ( within reason )
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check
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iight, let me break it down you to you like this, you aint no Jason Kidd, there will be no assists, but if you persist, I might make ya parents reminisce about why you don't fuck around with someone that you never thought preexists. I slap you in the face, throw your ass on the ground, knock you on the floor like Ben Wallace show you how to rebound, next time you might wanna think about coming around. Think your an emcee, I'll murder ya ass like a banshee, you flying around in a tornado just another piece of debris, hear your momma in the background saying "oh did he?" you're just another bitch, stay in the kitchen and fix me my iced tea, or there might be another killing spree. I laugh at people that aren't strong, why I play my theme song, everyone in the arena knew all along, this just isn't a place where fake mutha fuckas belong. Fake? fake, you feel that earth quake, you're about to look like chopped steak, why I just brush my shoulders off, to make sure there's no flakes. Now I must end this thing, I see you flying off that box spring, you might wanna bring some next time, you think about fuckin wit the king.
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I haven't seen what Femcee had to say yet but i didn't like BZ verse at all.
U need to work on the structure becuz it was a little hard to follow homie. |
[b]this aint no hood hop so keep things clean with no mistakes...
...hows this kid lovin 50 but turnin round to dis banks /1 either you down with all g-unit or be through it... ...and if you dont be through it, im goin'a see to it /2 you think your ideal emcee? you just head phony... ...you couldnt comprehend music industry if you read sony /3 your no gangstar, your even to prude to get into hell... ...you want a mic for Xmas, but dude your gettin a dell /4 people wouldnt feel you if you packed advise in sermons... ...youd be committing suicide if you pled to sacrifice a virgin /5[b] |
Well, I have to say that BZ took this one, although his shit was a lil too hard to follow and i didn't care for it, his punches were a lil harder. Femcee your punches were weak they weren't hard hitting at all girl since we have to vote one I will say BZ.
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bullshit
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damn, need credits...
aight: BZ punches: didnt hit once personals: truthfully none at all creativity: mediocre word play: goin no where structure: try bars, lines or some thing metas: they appeared alot femcee: punches: decent personals: had a few with the first line (links) ceativity:you have a good sense of relation word play: things went ok structure: you had some at least, unlike BZ metas: second bar had some, (g-unit lines) comment: those other two voters have to be dick riders cause femcee obviuosly took this away, no doubt. vote: femcee return the favor, about to battle liyrical flow |
finally a real vote, thankz but you didnt poll it
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i dont have 20 posts yet sorry, but when i get them ill poll it for sure...
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Nigga i'm not a dick rider don't even go there i don't give a fuck about none of these muthafuckas on here i'm just callin it how i see it in my damn eyes. We all have our own muthafuckin opinions on this muthafuckin site.
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And what the fuck difference is a "REAL" vote if all the shit is garbage? LMAO!
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oh your a girl dick rider eh? do you like anal or straight chu cha? (delete fp)
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I like it up the ass just like u nigga, remember that night I fucked u in the ass with my dildo?
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wake up. wake up.
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