The Black PLague Vs. datruth29
 

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You tell me to set up a battle and then no show? I have no Respect Fo Ya/
i'll murder u n then throw yo jacket over the pool of blood fo my girl to Step Ova/
shit, you couldn't even be ahead of me if you you Teleported/
your mouth is filth, everything that comes out you is "dead" like Abortions/
it's really up to me to spray ya'll like I Pop Bazookas/
i'm leaving The Black Plague in mo fuck up positions than Kamasutra/
You are a "BLack PLague" to the rap world, for it you shall be Banished/
and man, u beating me is like passing an English test in Spanish/
So spend your quiet nights "no showing", while I flow wit da Cold Rythm/
coz you just another rapper with out a "name", like John Doe Victims/

No Show..................

Ay sorry man, i told you i was leavin, just got back on today...

I'll spit in about half a hour, so hol up

it's all good but how do i know that you didn't go home and think real hard and then write a killer verse.. You told me in bitchslapped to set it up.. and I gave you the time limit.....
this should be DQed.......

If this kid calls himself the truth we know he must be lyin
I'm flyin, line 2 and I already can see his confidence dyin
Not that he had confidence to begin with...why is he tryin?
My dopeness is just immense, it's like gold to the miyans
But Dope lines from him are missin, like honesty from bill clinton
If you really are the truth could u tell me why you ain't winnin?
Kid you got no struc, ya lines are fucked up and badly scattered
My flow is like the windows on 50's H2, it simply can't be shattered
You tryin to call me a no show bitch, but man i'm just not havin it
How can you be a lightweight with verses that are less than average?

it was my birthday yesterday, i turned 18, so i wasn't at home writin a verse, it's not that important to me that my life revolves around it

opener - plague ( only just both was wack)
closer - da truth ( both was wack)
structure - da truth
flow - da truth
punches - da truth
metaz - da truth

overall - da truth

drop a vote on these links...i tooke the time so should u

http://community.rapbattles.com/showthread.php?t=133487

http://community.rapbattles.com/showthread.php?t=133335

http://community.rapbattles.com/showthread.php?t=133370

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upping

Yeah i thought both of them coulda came harder with the openers. Datruths didnt even really rhyme...I looked over it a couple times and I couldnt find it...I mighta missed it.

Their flows werent too bad, datruth transitioned from one line to another a lot better, but he had a couple lines streched. The black plague had a good flow in his lines, but didnt transition very well.

The punches were pretty one sided though, I liked the one about dead like abortions that was a nice meta. Black Plague you were throwin but you had a lot of basic rhymes, just need to be a little more complex with it.

No real good multies, or personals from either one of you.

Datruth was more consistent, and harder with his verse.

v/Datruth29

Opener - Plague
Closer - Plague
Structure - Truth
Flow - Plague
Punches - Truth
Metas - Truth
Personals - Neither

I hate it when that 3/3 shit happens. I have an odd number of categories for a reason, but they never seem to work out right. As stated above, I think both of these cats could have came a bit harder, but I'm gonna have to give this one to Plague.. It was a really tough call, but I think he came a bit closer to his potential..

v/The Black Plague

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Ok... My bad Black Plague, I didn't know that it was your birthday.... I considered you a no show

da truth has this 1 in the back since he outplayed the plauge in every catagory flow, struc, punchez, personals, the lot

if i cud vote i wud post, wen i can i will..........