what happend
 

when did rap turn into sylables and writen structure.
what happend to spiten a flow and haven you skilz ruptured...
... in one verse it like giving them your worst
leaven them with a curse lyinf montinless in a herse
what happend to just tha flow of ya rhymes
since when has it been about the way you spell the dyms
or any word at, n that it about rhythme listen to tha dj kick it
it should be about emcee and the way they lick it
or the way that lik others with out trouble
and all they do is spit to burst anothers buble
when has it been left to 12-16 sylable.
it should be about if you compations killable
people shoudn't be about typeing flow alone
but spit rhyme with many on ya micorphone
screw tha way you type it but the way you spit it
and you get you dj to sit there and hit it
and leave to no others just spit wit you borthers

upping for feed back

Hmmm...Im a newbie I know, so take this for what its worth, but I can tell you I 'preciate the message, but the rhymes were typical and I didn't catch any tight punchlines.

Peep mine if you wanna: http://community.rapbattles.com/showthread.php?t=133812