DON <VS> State CapiTol (this will end the beef)
 

aight
10 lines
due at 1 30
no dr regular house rules
ok this will end it capitol if i beat u i dont wna hear another thing about don this don that we both tired this ends it
good luck pc

yes i agree...aiight due at 1 30 lez get this shit on and popping.......good luck..........checkin in

enough outa you
 

i guess your first asswhoopin wasnt enough...so now you want anotha...
hardwood will neva earn its respect...since its made a herbs who feed off each otha...
the whole rosters wack...i cant believe elooch would become a member...
you start to battle vets thinkin youll gain respect...youll neva be a contender...
dont get excited and mess yaself this not you carrer and its no realife...
son id hate to break it to you but www means its just a website...
in ya sig ya brag you took out tactics...dont be proud they not a crew...
why dont you go into detail...and rep in that battle it was i who killed you...
so now you can shut the fuck up and accept you identity as a cunt...
now keep ya weak herbass outa elevated...put it where it belongs...in the front...

This Perverted fag Uses his moms sexual moans as Sound effects..
Your Final Outcome Is A loss like your Handicapped battle against those 5 vets..
Don? Sick? naww he Just Likes Swimming naked with the hospital paitents in vietnam..
First battle, merked him..he got kicked out the KKK cause i left him with a slight tan..
Only Thing "hiphop" about him, is his Nack Of Jumping From Crew to Crew..
Tried Karate but he's still in the gym infront of the bark, trying to get his head through.. :banghead:
Claiming he a thug cause his room electrictly heated.. (doesnt carry heater)
Tried Gettin into HWCS "Your FuckiN WACK!!" was how he was greeted..
Kid Was physically abused as a child no wonder all his words come out "AHG ARGH BLAHG"
You Could be in the game your whole life but you'll never be a vet like ostertag..*





ostertag plays for the utah jazz...hes been in the nba for 10 years and only averages iek 2 points a game LMFAO

eww that looks ugly let me repost that

This Perverted fag Uses his moms sexual moans as Sound effects..
Your Final Outcome Is A loss like your Handicapped battle against those 5 vets..
Don? Sick? naww he Just Likes Swimming naked with the hospital paitents in vietnam..
First battle, merked him..he got kicked out the KKK cause i left him with a slight tan..
Only Thing "hiphop" about him, is his Nack Of Jumping From Crew to Crew..
Tried Karate but he's still in the gym infront of the bark, trying to get his head through..
Claiming he a thug cause his room electrictly heated.. (doesnt carry heater)
Tried Gettin into HWCS "Your FuckiN WACK!!" was how he was greeted..
Kid Was physically abused as a child no wonder all his words come out "AHG ARGH BLAHG"
You Could be in the game your whole life but you'll never be a vet like ostertag..*

o shit i forgot u have pics damn i jus remembered that shit aight lets get the voting goin

Ok peeps t'was a nice battle fo sho but there can only be 1 winner and let me explain.

DON: T'was a nice verse wit sum nice punches and personals...not any multies from what i could see but thats aight, flow was a lil off in places and the structure was slightly stretched too this kinda let you down as sum verses you could've perhaps worded better. On the other hand tho u did diss the opposition quite well and did insult his crew which was quite good. Overall i give you a 6.5/10.

SC: A nice verse although u didnt need to post it 3 times lol. In my eyes although the first verses font was a lil hard to read, it did well for ya because the 2nd time u posted, it showed that ur verse was morre stretched than DONS. But im goin on the 1st only so there was a nice link there which was well placed, and also u hit the punches and personals round about as hard as DON, ur flow was aight although again improvement is also needed but overall jus a better verse 7/10.

V/SC Only just keep it up both improve ur structures thats all i gotta say

Ok Nice Battle Quick B/D

Open-i guess your first asswhoopin wasnt enough...so now you want anotha...
hardwood will neva earn its respect...since its made a herbs who feed off each otha...

Stretched But 8/10

Consitancy-the whole rosters wack...i cant believe elooch would become a member...
you start to battle vets thinkin youll gain respect...youll neva be a contender...

Descent-8/10

Bestline-dont get excited and mess yaself this not you carrer and its no realife...
son id hate to break it to you but www means its just a website...

9/10

Closer-so now you can shut the fuck up and accept you identity as a cunt...
now keep ya weak herbass outa elevated...put it where it belongs...in the front...
8/10

State

Open-This Perverted fag Uses his moms sexual moans as Sound effects..
Your Final Outcome Is A loss like your Handicapped battle against those 5 vets..

Nice 9/10

Consitant-Don? Sick? naww he Just Likes Swimming naked with the hospital paitents in vietnam..
First battle, merked him..he got kicked out the KKK cause i left him with a slight tan..

Descent 8/10

Bestline-open

Closer-Kid Was physically abused as a child no wonder all his words come out "AHG ARGH BLAHG"
You Could be in the game your whole life but you'll never be a vet like ostertag..*

Hahhahahahahahahahahah That Was Sick...10/10

Winner-State

okay this wasnt a close battle at all......Structure State takes the structure although he had to do his verse 3 times and it got worse each time.....shuda stuck wit the first one man.......Don your strcutre was okay but your shit just wasnt as good as states.......FlowState takes this aswell.......his flow was onpoint and was easy to go with and his verse flowed easly......Don your verse flowed but not as well as states cause your shit was a lil stretched in places.......Punches Again state take shit along with thePersonals don you just need to elevate.....i thik that wit you bayttling alot ova in normal FL has dulled your skillz

uppin.............................................

i guess your first asswhoopin wasnt enough...so now you want anotha...
hardwood will neva earn its respect...since its made a herbs who feed off each otha...
the whole rosters wack...i cant believe elooch would become a member...
you start to battle vets thinkin youll gain respect...youll neva be a contender...
dont get excited and mess yaself this not you carrer and its no realife...
son id hate to break it to you but www means its just a website...
in ya sig ya brag you took out tactics...dont be proud they not a crew...
why dont you go into detail...and rep in that battle it was i who killed you...
"IT WAS I WHO KILLED U"..SOUNDS FORCED AS HELL...WHEN U REARRANGE WORDS TO SPIT IN A BATTLE,THATS FORCED
so now you can shut the fuck up and accept you identity as a cunt...
now keep ya weak herbass outa elevated...put it where it belongs...in the front...
OVERALL WEAK...NO PUNCHES...NOTHIN REALLY STOOD OUT....



This Perverted fag Uses his moms sexual moans as Sound effects..
Your Final Outcome Is A loss like your Handicapped battle against those 5 vets..
Don? Sick? naww he Just Likes Swimming naked with the hospital paitents in vietnam..
First battle, merked him..he got kicked out the KKK cause i left him with a slight tan..
Only Thing "hiphop" about him, is his Nack Of Jumping From Crew to Crew..
LOL...THIS IS A VERY GOOD PERSONAL...NOT WORDED THE BEST,BUT THIS IS THE BEST LINE IN THIS BATTLE...HE HIP HOP CUZ HE JUMP CREW TO CREW ROFL...THATS FUNNY ASS SHIT
Tried Karate but he's still in the gym infront of the bark, trying to get his head through..
Claiming he a thug cause his room electrictly heated.. (doesnt carry heater)
Tried Gettin into HWCS "Your FuckiN WACK!!" was how he was greeted..
Kid Was physically abused as a child no wonder all his words come out "AHG ARGH BLAHG"
You Could be in the game your whole life but you'll never be a vet like ostertag..*

I WASNT REALLY FEELIN THE REST OF UR VERSE....ESPECIALLY THE AHG ARGH BLAHG N SOME OF UR FLOW WAS OFF...BUT THE HIP HOP /JUMP CREW TO CREW WAS THE ONLY PUNCH/PERSONAL IN THIS WHOLE BATTLE...SO FOR THAT IMMA GIVE THE WIN TO SC

N PLEASE,GET RID OF THAT FONT,IT MADE ME WANNA KILL MYSELF...I HAD TO PASTE IT IN NOTEPAD SO I CAN READ IT LOL