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The Mexican 07-07-04 01:45 AM

When i look at you
 
When I look at you I begin to cry inside
you’re the one I let get away
baby ur still important to me
I still want u in my life
as a friend or one day maybe even more
but aslong as your happy then I can continue to move forward
right now I’m lost n it still hurts 2 know
that in the mornin I’ll still sorrow
I still miss u ever since that day ‘n’ it hurts 2 know you moved on right away
but like I said ur happy
n that is all dat matters 2 me baby please forgive me
for all the things I’ve done or said
cuz right now if it wasn’t for you
I’d still be pissin my life
away or maybe even dead

The Mexican 07-07-04 01:48 AM

Feedback plz leave a link n i'll get back at u

The Mexican 07-08-04 12:58 AM

plz hit me up wit some feedback

FlipSix 07-08-04 10:01 PM

that poem is deep you got talent dawg

The Mexican 07-09-04 02:45 AM

ay thx man...uppin dis feed back plz

XêN†R!K 07-09-04 06:13 AM

n that is all dat matters 2 me baby please forgive me
for all the things I’ve done or said
cuz right now if it wasn’t for you
I’d still be pissin my life away or maybe even dead


im really feelin this piece..

emotional shit.. keep it up pimpin

God 07-10-04 01:21 AM

itt was a pretty dope peice lots of feelin but very short

The Mexican 07-10-04 01:56 AM

ay...thx fa the feedback...still uppin dis

The Mexican 07-11-04 12:41 AM

plz quit sleepin on dis...feedback plz

The Mexican 07-12-04 03:07 AM

uppin

The Mexican 07-13-04 09:01 PM

feedback plz

The Mexican 07-16-04 02:35 AM

uppin dis...

The Mexican 07-16-04 02:36 AM

leave a link n i'll hit u back

candy 07-16-04 02:36 AM

that is a nice poem i like it alot

The Mexican 07-16-04 02:40 AM

ty...uppin


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