Thuglifeoutlaw Vs. Fuse
 

READY TO GET RIPPED :shoot:

we will see>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>............

rules and you are goin first, if you didnt knw that already..

Listen Ill Have U Layin In Da Gutter Before U Will Know It
I Gotta Get Dis Butter To Stay Strapped Wit My 9 Cuz Dis Style Is Mine
Jus Let Me Sit Back And Unwine Take Ur Time U Might Need A Killa Line To Beat Me Cuz I Wear Da White Tee Wit Da Blue Jeans U Know Wut It Means Ima True Crip Da Way I Spit Dis Shit Da Way I Flip Dis Shit I Have These Hoes On There Knees Suckin My Dick Its Addictive Like Coke Watch My Lines Nigga U Might Choke Next Time U Will See Me Ill Be Standin In Gun Smoke Ill Leave A Chalk Line Beside U Dat Will Have Ur Moms Cryin

what were the rules how many to win.... I'm about to spit 5 min

Now i see why your record is zero-zero.//
after this rap you gone look at me as your hero.//
my votes gone look like i was gainin stock.//
You a back biter stealin your name from 2-pac.//
i smoke this nigga like a black in mild.//
Rap name buc-wild cause when you get a buck you go wild.//
i'll give you a word of advice change your name.//
and if you a crip your fellow members would be ashamed.//
Nigga best belive my rhymes are raw.//
Yea there will be a chalk outline next to me belongin to Thuglifeoutlaw.//
the way i spite god has blessed me.//
you say you use guns but dont know how to take it off safty.//

Faget

uppin fa votes pleasssssssssssssssssssseeeeeeeeeeeeeee

THUGLIFEOUTLAW
structure is wack as fuck...where r ur rhyme man?...god damn...there was no flow in my eyes...i could tell where u rhymin at all...no metas...wordplay was wack as fuck...none of ur punches connected...no good personals...

Fuse
structure was decent...flow fell off a little...no metas...wordplay was ok...a few of ur punches connected...personals were ok...

Overall
neither had metas...Fuse had the better structure...and the better flow...his wordplay was also better...and he had more connecting punches...as well as personals...so basing off of that...Fuse gets my vote...

VOTE - FUSE

i seen a lot better battles but in my opinion the only looser is the person who dont elevate.

structure - fuse
flow - fuse
punchlines - fuse
metaz - ?

drop a fair explained vote at these linkz plz....

http://community.rapbattles.com/showthread.php?t=133335

http://community.rapbattles.com/showthread.php?t=133370

http://community.rapbattles.com/showthread.php?t=133487

Stucture-Fuse
Flow- Fuse
Punchlines-Fuse
Fuse just came with it harder
Winner- Fuse

ha ha ha, Thugoutlaw got merk by some wak and played punchlines... thats all Im gonna say.

Structure, F
Flow, F
Punchlines, F
Metaphore, Fuse had a wak ass one in there but hay, it was there.

some of fuse lines were ok. but he didn't really do u in like he was supposed to.

P.s. if U can, please check out any of my battles in my sig. I got alot of old battle that dont get closed by wins for some reason, so I voted in this battle, please return the favor.

No beef, just words kids.

Damn....i Wastn Impressed.....thug If U Would Of Set It Up Better I Would Of Been Able To Read It........fuse......weak Lines.....played Out......vote Goes To Thug.........no Hate All Respect....
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Me vs. Thugzy

Thuglifeoutlaw - You need to work on ur structure. Make it definate where ya rhymes are. I couldn't tell where one bar ended and tha next started. Ya flow was basic. You didn't have any punches but i guess ya had a couple of multi's. Good luck and keep elevatin. 4/10

Fuse - Your spit was basic too. But you had a punch or so in there. Which gave you tha up. Lyrically you need to elevate and find some better rhymes. Keep elevatin. 5/10

Vote: Fuse