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Mimesis vs. THUGLIFEOUTLAW
aight i called out...he accepted...
10 lines no biting no crew/hate votes no feeding u spit first ill post after i see that uve posted good luck... |
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try and post ur verse tonight or tomorrow... i wanna get this shit closed soon... |
oh shit dont start on me im da greatest emcee dat u cant eva be/
i smash on motha fuckas dat like to try and smash on me/ ill start a feud like nas and jay-z but once i get done wit dis rap u wont see me/ cuz im always on da run im hot i cant be cot/ haters try to hate like u, u hate becuz u cant get pussy so u masterbate/ my rhymes r so hot dat u cant rate smartest emcee out ill have ur crew callin me da bill gates of dis rap game/ cuz once i get started i put ur lyrics to shame/ Now dat im done u will hear people sayin dat Mimesis's shit is lame/ |
lmao...y even try?...ill half ass this and still ko ur ass...
check it out...yo, yo... you go around 'shootin' off at the mouth but your skills are all out dead cause he needs attention so bad he does 'drive bys' in a callout thread! ur wackness is gonna spread...ur just a no-name attemptin to be tight cause he only typed his name like that... ...so he could finally have a CAPitol impact on the site! man ur wack tonight...so i leave ya head sprayed wit ill, and left in a swirl cause what kind of gangsta spends his 'rapperz' money on a fuckin playgirl! i may hurl...u r shit is sickening...u just aint cuttin me, like usin a dull knife and it only fits that ur crew is CRIPZ... ...cause we know u'll be a lyrical handicap ur whole life! ima roll ur light...leave ya future in darkness...so dawg...dont even act big and y should we value ur words?...ur shootin ur own damn words in ur sig! Quit Pmin Me Sayin You Ripped Me... Fuck You... |
This was a good battle. Thuglife had it going in da beginnin but then he lost it towards da end. You need to stregnthen your punchlines and legnthen your lines. good try though.
Mimesis took this one cause his structure was da best. He had a nice flow to go wit it too. Your punchlines were good too but it got a little confusin and hard to read wit those extra lines but it was good. Ok battle v/Mimesis |
vote 4 thuglifeoutlaw
this battle wasnt all that, the way mimesis was talking i thought he was j hove but he came out lame, and was is u people's definition of a fucking metaphor? cause everybody in rb swear they fucking rap critics but when i read u shit it be LAMe
and structure? STRUCTURE? what structure?!! read this shit to a beat and tell me if it'll fit this goes to thugout4life cause his shit is simple to read and it's to the point |
LMFAO @ hotshhs vote...ur just mad cause i voted against u faggot...
and structure and flow doesnt win battles, to the 2 people who have voted against me... and in case there was any confusion...all of my punches were personals... in his rapperz inventory he had a playgirl and in my open bitchslapped thread he was all, *drive -by*, poppin a cap or somethin like that.... but yall need to hop off of some dicks...seriously... |
man i think this was a little one sided in a way cause Mimesis had better personals and punches. But Thuglifeoutlaw had a nice structure but the personals win it over for me man.
Mimesis got this one |
ohh yea drop an honest vote here for me to man cuz we need some votes http://community.rapbattles.com/showthread.php?t=133732
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You fuckin' wack ass voters. Damn, I'd gladly merk all of you dumbasses that say "Read his shit and see if it flows to the beat". Omfg that's why it's called text you stupid dumbfucks.
Mimesis had much better punches that killed his opponent. Other dude came wack as fuck, meh, didn't like his verse at all. And for you idiots, umm you can't take a written text and try to flow it to a beat you idiots. Coz each beat is different. You have to write to a beat. Not write without knowin' what the beat is. Omfg stupid dumbfucks. V/Mimesis |
werd @ flowin to a beat in TEXT...lmfao...
but anywho... 3-2 me... UPPIN # 2 !!!! leave a link and ill return the favor... |
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word^ shit this was one sided mimesis aka daedal(yes i know who you are) had punches that destroyed thug..thug didnt have no punches at all well he did like 1 or 2 but it was played or whack as fuck...his whole verse was selfglorification or filler...man you need to diss the person not say that you was goin to kill him and shit...go to rb original and read vet battles to elavate vote/mimesis for harder punches and better verse |
thuglife u had a bad structure your punches didnt hit hard u barely had any no personal's no word play no vocab that was just wack
mimesis good wordplay some punches def hit harder than his some personal's decent structure vocab could have been betta though but u still beat him u had a good verse structure mim punches mim vocab none but mim personal's mim word play mim overall vote mim word of advice tug elevate man |
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