Sporadic Vs Fuse
 

go ahead and do your thing. stop wastin time........

This herb reFUSE's to spit first so he can feed on my lyrical creation
coz he lacks in interlect,
...and an active battle imagination
Your static just not going anywhere, while my elevation is persistant
your talent is like ur avatar character,
...fake and nonexistant
can tell hes a herb by his basic rhymes the name emcee u abuse
shock him with lyrical voltage
...call me a electric surge the way this fuse
taking dignity, strangle your pride for pleasure like your penis when u jerk it
your rhymes are like a current
...whens theres no complete circuit!
Got you SHOCKED got you squeezed like bacteria when your zit popping
squeezing ass cheeks together
...is the only good shit u be droppin!

i'll hit you up its just i'm off work so i'll give it to you tommorow.//
-k-

i forgot about our battle but if possible i can hit you up soon

i will vote when the other guys posts his verse but can u hit this up and the favor will be return
http://community.rapbattles.com/showthread.php?t=133541

if you dont drop b4 7 2nite then im cliaming this as a no show..hurry the fuck up

how can u forget!!! its on ur active battle list!!! fuck sake

your lyrics are O.K. i didnt know you had it in you.//
your name speaks for itself not to continue//
Your a hoe nigga, ya'll all the same.//
i can tell you love me by how many times you used my name.//
in all your bars your lackin.//
your name is also a rock band so stop rappin.//
you say you got me shocked so i guess i'm energized.//
by the time you done readin i'll have you teary eyed.//
I'm ya daddy so best belive i'ma spank you.//
Your mom gave me head advice so tell her thank you.//

Faget

ok lol lets start getting some votes up in this bitch...riggghhtttt

uppss.....................cum on 53 views and no fucking votes cantn be serious

in all aspects u both were weak n i couldnt decide on which 1 had the better punches seen as i wasnt feelin any of em i am gon go wid the verse i felt the most (if any) n the 1 i cud enjoy readin most

v - fuse

p.s - sporadic that kinda structure is hella wack n is dam anoying n will loose u votes. i cud read fuse verse easier

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Spor: Nice style/structure (similar to mine). The wordplay with his name helped the punches and personals along, they all connected well and hti hard. Vocab was impressive too.

Energy: Definitely need to work on your style and structure. When its that messed up it doesnt help the punches, which were already weak in my opinion.

v/Sporadic

Spor: Nice style/structure (similar to mine). GET A GRIP STANK THAT STRUCTURES PATHETIC
BOTH WERE KIND OF WEAK DROPS BUT LET ME BREAK IT DOWN.
flow...fuse
structure fuse.
punclines spor
personals fuse
both could of came better... but fuse gave that lil more
plus like this line

your lyrics are O.K. i didnt know you had it in you.//
your name speaks for itself not to continue//
my vote goes to fuse

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you cant rap, watch your back, ill kill you wit my nine, and you think youll be living ha ha ha your mine, ill take your life cuz your the one to tell everyone, i really want to die thats kool wit me cuz ill take you by surprise