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EXPLICIT VS Khaos_daRenegade
yea tha rules
u spit first verses due 30 mins after check in must check in at least in 10 mins after tha thread goes up no dr votes no crew votes 3-0 is a ko |
im checkin in dawg i'll be ready in a few minutes.
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yea thas cool i gotta take my shower and i'll drop good luck
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CHECKIN IN i aint even gotta speak to yall look at his name its renagade~ probally has HIV he cant grow no hair so he has to renta fade~ take this kid's head to tha pavement curb let it bang and beat~ that's the only time this kid is ever gonna be from tha street~ tha verbal abuse get's at him then inside he dies from a blood clot~ put gas on him throw him over tha roof that's the only time he droppin hot~ i thought i saw this guy's face before he was tha 1 hollering rape~ tha fact's are their people he from chitown he was on that r kelly tape~ yea i aint never seen this guy spit so he might win before it even started~ but he just like tha special olmpic's even if he wins he still retarted~ my structure was off but fuck it |
dawg u a bitch,aint got no heart g/
im smokin on dis dro while u blowin on parsley/ u only scratch da surface dawg neva could scar me/ i put bricks on da land u just land on da concrete/ and if i want u dead bitch i just say da word/ dats why niggas scared to hustle cuz i spray da curb/ and u wanna be a thug but u just not/ no need for a vest cuz it wont be no chest shots/ leave u cats bleedin on yo desk top/ and have u jumpin like kris kross when da tech pop/ |
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uppin for sum mutha fuckin votes..........................
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uppin for sum votes leave a link i'll hit it up pc...
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EXPLICIT
structure was good...flow was on target...no good metas...wordplay was tight...most of ur punches connected...personals were ok.... Khaos_daRenegade dont put the /s at the end of ur lines...its newbish...but uh...structure was decent...it was to simple though...flow was on lock...u had a few metas...wordplay was simple and wack...none of ur punches connected...no good personals... Overall Khaos_daRenegade had more metas...EXPLICIT had the better structure...the more stable flow...better wordplay...more connecting punches...and better personals...so basing off of that...EXPLICIT gets my vote... VOTE - EXPLICIT PLEASE return the favor with an honest vote on the link in my sig...thanx... |
EXPLICIT your punches hit pretty good and you had some good personnals. your flow and structure was easy to read. Overall not a bad verse.
Khaos_daRenegade your flow and vocab was kinda simple. punches weren't really hittin neither was your personnals. your lines were kinda short...just try to elevate some. vote Explicit Return the favor! |
Explicit took this easily. He had better disses and punches. I wasnt really feeling Khaos's cuz he just talked about killing him. He didnt have no wordplay or nothin neither. Khaos's verse coulda been directed to anybody too. You coulda dissed him cuz he lives in Jersey or somthin but wateva. Overall, Explicit came to rap with personals and punches that hit hard.
Vote - Explicit Return tha favor: http://community.rapbattles.com/sho...108#post1394108 |
Aight this battle is goin to EXPLICIT.. heres how im breakin it down.....
EXPLICIT - Yo you had nice flow... punches were overall better.. Your structure was a little off but w/e it doesnt matter TOOO much.. personals were not bad.. coulda been better... KHAOS - Your spit was also nice.. but you lacked in the punches department, i would like to see more out of you.. overall it wasnt that bad of a spit.. things you could work on could be wordplay, and harder punches.. Good spits by both.. my votes goin to EXPLICIT on this one.. just because he had better punches... |
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explicit ripped him in every area.. flow was a lil off in some places, n ya lines stretched a couple times.. punches n wordplay not that good but better than ren's
renegade.. you gotta work on your rhyme scheme... simple flows are very shit... gangsta punches mean nuthin on the net man.. elevate v/explicit one yo return the favour, need votes on me vs hoops.. just one more |
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