GEE vs. Exogenious
 

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he think he has style with a name like GEE
your time and raps "sold out like vending machines"
i see the truth in your sig and as a matter of facts
its like a earth quake....this uneven match

lets start the sonin'....
when spittin flames a ton,U stupid herb! i'll evade ur puns
even if U 'look at it backwards' theres NoWay-YaWon!*
fuck ya record ,ya style needs elevation so i'll noose this guy
your leaft with out pride...
U more 'full of yourself' than cannibalistic suicides
u'll be ripped in an instance,u can see how distant the win is
gettin personal....?
oh well i'll cross the line then pick the shit up n haunt u with it
so you from sacramento where the govinator is crakin
and you taking the win is like the kings winning...
...it wont happen
-sincerly yours, Exo...

*no way backwards spells ya won
916 is sacramento

He says he's a "genius", he spelled his name with extra "O's"/
ta make up for praises he doesnt get in tha votes.
This bitch is an "ex-genius", I X'd out your life son.
like a game of tic tac toe, I get the "O's", and I won.
This doo is a fag, gettin fucked is part of your schedule/
always be tellin me, "I want the dick perpetual."
It's "Ludicrous", even your grin showing/
your bf leave you with "pains" cuz his dick "growing*"!
Like SP, I get high like mountain climbers/
this guy "still" wouldnt be "fly", if he was Baby on the Big Tymers.
It's all twisted like Mobb Deep, if you think youre gonna prevail/
that's like you tellin me, youre attracted to females.
So this guy is gonna dress up like a girl, I'll see you on the pop charts/
I roasted, toasted, and ate this bitch like he was a poptart.

*Ludacris-Growing pains

Good battle...
-Uppin for some votes.............

Nice battle....

GEE I was feelin ya from the start pretty god shit. The opener was nice, then you added to it and said you get all the wins and Os. I guess you were meaning noone votes against you. The flow was pretty good, structure was a lil off, fix that and the flow will be superb. The punches were damn hard, some real nice personals...I liked that. Some nice metas in there also, and ended with a multi.

Exogenious...I wasnt really feelin most of ya lines. You had a few in there that wasnt rhyming. At time your structure was all over the place....so I couldnt really keep up with ya. Towards the in you really seemed to fall off, as this was where a lot of things werent rhyming. You did try to use some metas though but they really werent that hard towards GEE.

v/GEE

uppin for votes

Thanks fa keepin it honest...Still uppin for some votes

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Vote=Exogenious

Punches were harder.Your structure could use some work cuz its difficult to follow your flow.Gee had ok structure,but your punches were not very hard.They just wasn't hitting.

VOTE ON DAMN BATTLES,I did take time to read this shit

this was a good battle...some funny ass lines up in here.
Gee: ur structure was good and ur flow was smooth, nice punches and multies that hit hard against Exo, what did it for me was ur wordplay son, ur words and rhyme scheme was tight,popcharts, poptarts line was hot as an ending, some funny personals on his name, u dropped hard hits from beginning to end....
Exo:ur opener was good,ur structure was a little all over the place,good wordplay on the No Way-Ya Won line, ur best, i also liked the govinator shit but i just dont think u came ur hardest here.....
VOTE:Gee

.............................................Uppin

Gee
Your improving quite a bit. I liked your start. Good find on the O's. Those are the kind of personal's that Im talkin about. The non-obviouse one's. Good one. Definitly gettin better wit your flo also. Fix your structure just a tad tho.
Exo
Not a bad drop also. Same wit the structure. Also you need to create more flo. Try to mix more multi's in there. I like a few of your metiphores as well jus harden up your punches.

Vote/GEE

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