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Triple_N merking Polifick
Ah'ight here the rules
NO crew votes NO d/r 30 min blind spit start after check in 6-16 lines TripleN DQ'ed for missing 30 min deadline |
yeah here my check in, so lets go son!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
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A Discrace 2 Rb The Only Time YOu Applauded...
Shouldve Neva Came back.. Now You Catching More Boos Then A Drunk Achoolic... A Newb Crew That Suits You Plain Wack.... far From good... Light a Match 2 A rail Wont make a Hott Track... 5 Votes...Y He Just Stand Corrected... Flawless Punchlines... Like His Wrist-Fist-Not Even Connected.... When You get Nominated Biggest Crybaby Only.... Im 1 of Tha Wackest.... Unmentioned And Far From Good Like Luke Lonley... Leave Yo Computer Depressed...U Remain Fear... Jury Sentenced Yo Lyrics 2 Tha Eletric Chair... |
Ah'ight son they say loses are lessoned learned, well here's lesson number 1
U wack 13 yr old bitch, I'm grown son, going against my reign u won't remain Cuz fact is even if you was a runaway slave you still wouldn't be off da chain You a obvious cornball, dats why you don't even have one backer!! U couldn't be wacker, ya new name saletine cuz u the forum's biggest cracker I mean everyone thats peeped ya battles know in the beginning u stand stout U must take barber lessons, cuz you've mastered the ability to fade out You can't fuck wit Triple, you just to young to see me its just that simple I mean come on son, while I'm poppin collars you poppin' pimples But I can't front, polifick always roll wit two shawties, yo u da man!!!! When he out before peeps greet him they say hi to his left an right hand But keep dreaming of getting pussy youngster cuz its good to have goals Cuz even if u were a pga. finalist on green u still wouldn't get no hole Thats a Wrap!!!!!!!!!!!!...this has been yet another exclusive with Triple_N |
Damn I wasted perfectly good punches on this shit!!!!!!!!
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A Discrace 2 Rb The Only Time YOu Applauded...
Shouldve Neva Came back.. Now You Catching More Boos Then A Drunk Achoolic... A Newb Crew That Suits You Plain Wack.... this rhymes scheme and strucute aint workin 6/10 far From good... Light a Match 2 A rail Wont make a Hott Track... 5 Votes...Y He Just Stand Corrected... Flawless Punchlines... Like His Wrist-Fist-Not Even Connected.... When You get Nominated Biggest Crybaby Only.... Im 1 of Tha Wackest.... Unmentioned And Far From Good Like Luke Lonley... not feelin this poli. this strucutre aint workin 6/10 Leave Yo Computer Depressed...U Remain Fear... Jury Sentenced Yo Lyrics 2 Tha Eletric Chair... best line..nice punch but forced rhyme 8/10 overall 20/30 bad strcutre and flow triple N U wack 13 yr old bitch, I'm grown son, going against my reign u won't remain Cuz fact is even if you was a runaway slave you still wouldn't be off da chain You a obvious cornball, dats why you don't even have one backer!! U couldn't be wacker, ya new name saletine cuz u the forum's biggest cracker all wauz good cept for the last line. 7/10 I mean everyone thats peeped ya battles know in the beginning u stand stout U must take barber lessons, cuz you've mastered the ability to fade out You can't fuck wit Triple, you just to young to see me its just that simple I mean come on son, while I'm poppin collars you poppin' pimples haha lst line was tight ^^ good shit lol 8/10 But I can't front, polifick always roll wit two shawties, yo u da man!!!! When he out before peeps greet him they say hi to his left an right hand But keep dreaming of getting pussy youngster cuz its good to have goals Cuz even if u were a pga. finalist on green u still wouldn't get no hole wasnt feelin second line but rest was tight 7/10 overall 23/30 my vote triple N |
damnn due Ova da deadline i must say
Biggest cracker??Im Black lol Stretched linez And Also Sex Scandles Are old |
alright
triple N: your punches hit hard but you should of worded things differently..bad wordplay didnt see interesting vocab your srtucture was ASS CHEEKS your flow was...............^^ your personals were hittin pretty hard though your meta's were sick..like the slave line overall: good shit estimation of 65/100 polifick: you had good shit but your shit wasnt hittin to hard after didnt seee too many punches..they all personals flow was sick that was good your structure was alright.........pretty good your meta's were hittin personals were hittin hard fo sho good vocab overall : 61/100 close battle but triple N took this one becuz of better punches...if you would of stretched yoru shit longer you prolly would of took this Pol... |
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A Discrace 2 Rb The Only Time YOu Applauded...
Shouldve Neva Came back.. Now You Catching More Boos Then A Drunk Achoolic... I LIKED THIS,THIS IS UR BEST LINE A Newb Crew That Suits You Plain Wack.... far From good... Light a Match 2 A rail Wont make a Hott Track... HMMM...RAILROAD/TRACK LINES ARE GETTIN MAD PLAYED OUT 5 Votes...Y He Just Stand Corrected... Flawless Punchlines... Like His Wrist-Fist-Not Even Connected.... WHAT DOES FLAWLESS AND WRIST-FIST NOT CONNECTING HAVE TO DO WITH EACH OTHER? When You get Nominated Biggest Crybaby Only.... Im 1 of Tha Wackest.... Unmentioned And Far From Good Like Luke Lonley... THIS IS WACK Leave Yo Computer Depressed...U Remain Fear... Jury Sentenced Yo Lyrics 2 Tha Eletric Chair... GAY U wack 13 yr old bitch, I'm grown son, going against my reign u won't remain Cuz fact is even if you was a runaway slave you still wouldn't be off da chain LOL I LIKE THIS You a obvious cornball, dats why you don't even have one backer!! U couldn't be wacker, ya new name saletine cuz u the forum's biggest cracker I mean everyone thats peeped ya battles know in the beginning u stand stout U must take barber lessons, cuz you've mastered the ability to fade out SHOULD'VE WORDED IT BETTER,WOULD'VE BEEN A GOOD PUNCH..IT WAS STILL OK You can't fuck wit Triple, you just to young to see me its just that simple I mean come on son, while I'm poppin collars you poppin' pimples LOL NOT HARD HITTIN BUT IT WAS FUNNY CONSIDERING U MENTIONED HE'S 13 But I can't front, polifick always roll wit two shawties, yo u da man!!!! When he out before peeps greet him they say hi to his left an right hand But keep dreaming of getting pussy youngster cuz its good to have goals Cuz even if u were a pga. finalist on green u still wouldn't get no hole DECENT PUNCH AGAIN POLIFICK...U HAD THE BOOS LINE THAT WAS STRAIGHT..THE TRACK LINE IS PRETTY PLAYED....I THINK TRIPLE CAME HARDER....THE RUNAWAY SLAVE,THE FADE OUT/BARBER LINE N THE GOLF LINE WERE HIS BEST N THEY WERE BETTER THAN POLIFICK'S BEST LINES............SO IMMA VOTE TRIPLE |
lol I was feelin both of yalls punchlines, this was a pretty good battle. I think Triple_N had slightly better punches though. The first 4 lines were just pretty syck.
The flow was def givin to Triple_N, Prolific ya bars were kinda streched in some places, and it threw ya flow off quite a few times. You gotta keep the same structure goin if you decide to go with long then short lines or something. The metas were def goin in Triples favor as well, not that prolifick didnt come with any, they just werent hard enough. Triple was a lot more consistent and he overwhelmed Prolifick...you always gotta come hard every battle no matter what. v/Triple_N |
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