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God 07-07-04 11:09 PM

Strongest person
 
LethalNjection
Drunk, out of school, sitting in prison; wasn't pretty
Things finally looking up, back to the books and now i'm Dirty
Homie hurry, on my way, a warrior everyday
Worry weighing my brain praying the warrior would stay
He by her side when grandma died, like a rock you took the pain
I feel outside, ain't lending aid, simply looking through the pane
In my mind i see you dying, high as when you flew a plane
They set the rules, you knew the game, and still refused to play
Cancer can take your life, but fuck it, while alive do it your way
The story, of a man beat to his knees that still stands
Horrid alcoholic, quit cold, stuck through, a real man
What i want to be, damn, steel soul, soft heart
Extending helping hands going through your own rough parts
Malignant in silence, building up our tolerance
Learning little by bits on how the hours commence
It's your power convincing me never to quit
For ever i live, i now know power is life
Grown from cowardice nights, and now we are light
I tried to cry when i heard Unc., it seemed only right
But like my dad i had learned from it, your deeds showed me fight
And now a model of life developed springing to bloom
Fuck clinging to gloom, you'd want me singing to you
So that's what i'll do, be it 3 months or a year
Just for you i'll be as strong as you as long as you here

God 07-08-04 09:21 PM

uppin for some feed back please.......

Prephix 07-08-04 09:34 PM

nice dawg, I was feelin the flow and the vocab. change, nice man.

Prephix, the prehistorical scribe
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God 07-09-04 10:28 PM

lol^^thankz can i get some more feed back on this thank you

Reign Storm 07-09-04 11:29 PM

yea...i was feelin the flow. nice wordplay 2...nice spit

God 07-10-04 12:34 AM

thankz man can i get some morem fed back on this please

God 07-10-04 06:22 PM

uppin for some more feed back on this please.......

Introspect. 07-10-04 10:51 PM

nice shit good flow good play overall nice open mic 8/10 pc dawg

YaYo 07-11-04 01:28 AM

damnn yo the vocab and everything was tyt man keep it up

YaYo 07-11-04 01:28 AM

i would rate ya spit a 10 MAYN its tyt no doubt man

God 07-12-04 12:53 PM

^^thankz for the feed back..can I get some more please...

FLooZe 07-12-04 08:37 PM

damn hot spit.good wordplay and original.9/10.your flow was good and your structure was near perfection

God 07-13-04 01:03 AM

thank you.. uppin for some more feed

God 07-17-04 03:41 AM

uppin on this one .....

grandrapper 07-17-04 03:42 AM

that was cool dawg nice work


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