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verbal violence 07-08-04 12:18 AM

-Strype- vrs.. verbal violence
 
aight no limit to lines
drop with in a hour
no hater crew d/r votes
u drop first
~one~

-Strype- 07-08-04 01:07 AM

haha, aight, good luck dawg..


This poor kid thinks he won just cuz I'm New to the Site
somebody should teach him to tie his Shoes when he Fights
who the fuck's CFK? - I don't need a Crew to be Tight
I'm the type to abuse, you ever been Bruised wit a Mic?
already Losin' ya Life n' this is only my First Match
spit a Verse That'll Blast Verbs and make it this Herbs Last
this is my Third Lap on your Word Track, kid's only 15
Yer so scared that ya Shakin and it's Makin ya Shit Green
this Kid's Team is so elementary, couldn't even Cop a Bottle
how da'fuck you gonna act a thug, when ya ass is from Colorado?
gimme a break, you haven't seen an emcee who's Gifted n' Flexin
I'm Shiftin ya Neck n' twistin ya body into Different Directions
leave ya Blistered wit Redness, how's that for Verbal Violence?
I peeped some of your blurred rhymes but all I Heard was Silence
lacked votes, but I had hopes til I got to the Sixth Wack Verse
ya can't beat a vet wit a record that's better Flipped Backwards


heh, I've noticed that the people don't bother explaining their
personals on this site.. so I'm assumin ya'll are quick enough
to catch em.. if I did anything wrong, lemme know..

good luck verbal..

verbal violence 07-08-04 01:27 AM

aight only time i tie my shoes is when they loose no need to be tight//
ima leave him mental and ill have him seeing black and white stripes//
fo the rest his life wonderin why he aint able to pic up a mic//
cuz he got verbally abused by this master killa i aint see why he tried//
only thing thats stryped is the lines on the road just look to tha side//
he say he fliipin me in different directions,he only sad cuz he aint got muscles to be flexin//(strectched my bad)
bringin him down like he was stresson raps worst aint u learned ya lesson//
vocal eviction he got it like mobb deep but more twisted//
3 months from now ur name will still be unlisted//
battlin someone with the verbal tension,burn him with my venom give him a infection//
im from colorado ull be the first to get a lethol injection//
ya verse was so bad moderator needs to put a suspension//
aint no need to say ya wack but its a flow i gotta mention//

aight uppin fo votes on this

verbal violence 07-08-04 02:18 PM

uppin for votes on this leave a link i will drop a honest vote

Ameen 07-08-04 02:24 PM

aiyo, please vote on these......
Me vs RV
Me vs Poetic Justice

Strype - Good flow, but the puches were weak and the multis were good 7/10

Verbal Violence - Better punches but had weaker flow than Strype but i think he had the overall better verse

vote - Verbal Violence

BrOtHa-HoOd 07-08-04 02:32 PM

am a strype cos he was more creative n he had better wordplay n punches, n verbal another reason is that u were biting his vers with ur opener

vote strype

drop a vote on this

http://community.rapbattles.com/showthread.php?t=133335

verbal violence 07-08-04 02:36 PM

uppin fo votes on this dont sleep aight~one~......

Durmil 07-08-04 02:41 PM

Punches-tie...both weak in my opinion
Personals- Strype
flow-strype
structure-stripe
Multi's-Verbal
Creativity-Tie
Overall-Strype

Neither of your punches were that strong, verbal u had a lil more creativity but u got up'd in personals and flow...ur multi's were ight but his personals won him the battle

no hate...and plz drop an HONEST vote on this battle of mine..thanx homies
http://community.rapbattles.com/showthread.php?t=133736

verbal violence 07-08-04 06:10 PM

uppin fo mo votes leave a link i will return tha favor ma word

-Strype- 07-08-04 08:29 PM

Durmil, you really think he took the multis category? Just wonderin.. but thanks for the votes guys, definately appreciated.. If anybody has any battles that need votes, go 'head and link em up.. Good lookin' folks..

verbal violence 07-09-04 12:06 AM

uppin fo mo votes on this battle aight~one~.......

mistah_tate 07-09-04 12:23 AM

i'm feelin strype more, he came harder, had better punches, better flow, more metaphors, verbal's shit was hot too but strype definately came harder, he got my vote

mistah_tate 07-09-04 12:24 AM

now yall return the favor and vote on my own batte here http://community.rapbattles.com/showthread.php?t=133939

Prodigy 07-09-04 06:56 AM

~Stype~
This poor kid thinks he won just cuz I'm New to the Site
somebody should teach him to tie his Shoes when he Fights
^Nice opener good bar^

who the fuck's CFK? - I don't need a Crew to be Tight
I'm the type to abuse, you ever been Bruised wit a Mic?
^Again nice bar good punch^

already Losin' ya Life n' this is only my First Match
spit a Verse That'll Blast Verbs and make it this Herbs Last
^Not your best^

this is my Third Lap on your Word Track, kid's only 15
Yer so scared that ya Shakin and it's Makin ya Shit Green
^Lol back on track good punch^

this Kid's Team is so elementary, couldn't even Cop a Bottle
how da'fuck you gonna act a thug, when ya ass is from Colorado?
^Good punch and personal^

gimme a break, you haven't seen an emcee who's Gifted n' Flexin
I'm Shiftin ya Neck n' twistin ya body into Different Directions
^Good bar^

leave ya Blistered wit Redness, how's that for Verbal Violence?
I peeped some of your blurred rhymes but all I Heard was Silence
^Best bar so far, good punch and personal^

lacked votes, but I had hopes til I got to the Sixth Wack Verse
ya can't beat a vet wit a record that's better Flipped Backwards
^Nice close again good bar^

VV
aight only time i tie my shoes is when they loose no need to be tight//
ima leave him mental and ill have him seeing black and white stripes//
^Not a bad opener, good personal^

fo the rest his life wonderin why he aint able to pic up a mic//
cuz he got verbally abused by this master killa i aint see why he tried//
only thing thats stryped is the lines on the road just look to tha side//
^Need to keep work on the structure, not bad^

he say he fliipin me in different directions,he only sad cuz he aint got muscles to be flexin//(strectched my bad)
bringin him down like he was stresson raps worst aint u learned ya lesson//
^Not your best bar^

vocal eviction he got it like mobb deep but more twisted//
3 months from now ur name will still be unlisted//
^Nice best bar so far^

battlin someone with the verbal tension,burn him with my venom give him a infection//
im from colorado ull be the first to get a lethol injection//
^Nice bar structure gone again, need to keep the lines tight^

ya verse was so bad moderator needs to put a suspension//
aint no need to say ya wack but its a flow i gotta mention//
^Nice close^

Strype come out nice in this battle, flowed nice, structure
was good but come out at times. More Creativity then VV
and I think the punchs he droped hit harder and had better
personals,,,..

VV, again come out nice in this battle but the structure was
pretty messy, made it hard to flow from a reads point of view
but it was good at times when you kept it tight. Creativity
was their but you did feed off his verse. Had some hard hitting
punchs but I think ~S~ won had a better verse and was more
consistent.

Vote~Strype

-Strype- 07-09-04 02:58 PM

Uppin' for votes..

Thanks folks..


If any of ya'll have unfinished battles, lemme know.. I'll peep em


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