MR.Goodbar vs. DaTruth29
 

Let's try this again, shall we...


I'll rip each tooth outta DaTruth's skull by the roots in twos/
I'm "Mr. Goodbar", your as soft as a shelf full of "BabyRuths"/
DaTruth?, your whole name is false like a lie-to-me/
I use my middle fingers to type but flip you off TWICE with the smilies/ :thefinger :gfy:
In fact, I'll beat out "datruth 29" times in a row/
Mr. Goodbar's pure chocolate, DaTruth confused like white oreos/
So hickory-dickory dock, this victory's locked down in my favor/
So lick-on-my-cock as the clock tickity-tocks down then describe the flavor/
You disrespecting me all the while testing my style/
Bitch I'll make you disapear like the 3rd and 4th members of Destinys Child/
Fuck a text battle, this is a "Text-as Chainsaw Massacre"/
Back over ya ass backwards with back end of an Acura/
Pierce your blatter with an infected needle from Africa/
And watch the HIV scatter throughout your DNA matter/
And I'll use my last line to spit a glass of water at-cha --> :spit:

im waitin dawg, u rushed me but u dont seem ready, i hope you post by morning

well if DaTruth ain't gonna reply can I at least get some feed back on my rhymez, I dont want them to go to waste

I Went To Sleep On You Dawg... You took too long, but here is my verse, I won't feed of yours.....


Check it....

Man, if you had to rhyme to eat, then surely you Would Starve/
I agree, you are prolly a "Mr.", yet you never wrote a "Good" "Bar"/
This dude being half as tight as I am? Cuz, you Sound Foolish/
He can walk the circumference forever n still won't get "Around" Loosin/
If I loose to Mr. Goodbar by votes, then best believe it was all hating/
coz a good MC and his style won't "CLICK", like phones without Call Waiting/
you Can't Spit, i rather listen to rap in another language then yo Gay Shit/
every fuckin word you say is "Fake", like you got yo lyrics from the Matrix/
you'll get bombarded hard when I charge and barge in with Bars Player/
battling me's like unprotected sex, seems safe, but'll leave u Scared Later/
And I compare myself to a belt.... I'm Black, And I Rap(wrap) Tight/
as for you "Mr. "BadBars", you're just about as Whack As The Last Guy/
No name, just another MC that I Happened Ta Slaughter /
A punk, who couldn't even "fill my shoes" with a Gallon Of Water/

Clarification... In the last bar I was talking about Mr. Good Bar, not "the last guy"


uppin

this was a pretty close battle...
Punches-Truth
Personals-Truth...ur opener was a great play on his name
Structure-Tie
Flow-Goodbar
Meta's-Tie
Multi's-Goodbar
Opener-Truth
Closer-Truth...neither were anything great tho
Wordplay-Truth...but close

Overall im gunna vote DaTruth...harder hittin punches, i liked ur wordplay better and yea...good battle both yaz keep at it

plz drop an HONEST vote on this battle of mine ight....
http://community.rapbattles.com/showthread.php?t=133736

nice battle

goodbar: you had a nice drop flow was there....punches were decent
but the opener was weird..........originality/creativity was pretty
okay in my eyes

truth: I think you came a lot harder in punches yep.....................
your flow was pretty good I was feelin it a lot...........................
originality/creativity was pretty good....................................

due to punches DaTruth29 gets my vote

I think he blacklisted me tho....

opener - truth
closer - truth
flow - mr.g
structure - mr.g
personals - truth
punches - truth
metaz - truth

overall - truth gets my vote

poll a vote on this battle,

http://community.rapbattles.com/showthread.php?t=133335

Goodbar - Good spit, puches were fairly good, and flowed well 7/10

Truth - Just edged it with better wordplay and punches 8/10

Please return the favour...
Me vs RV
Me vs Poetic Justice

This was a good battle. I liked that one text-as chain massacre line by goodbar. But that one line with hickory dock thin was probably his best line. Truth came with punches in every line though, and his opener was ill...This battle was close but Truth won with better punches and disses.

Vote - Truth

Return tha favor:
http://community.rapbattles.com/showthread.php?t=133759

da truth got this by far it was close but goody bags kept talkin like he was gay not to be mean but i read it and its like he wants datruth lol

truth good punches flow muties and structure ur over all stats is better than him
good bar weak dawg weak punches nuttin special flow was aight
but datruth had better punches and thas what won this battle
v/datruth

can u drop a vote on this and return tha favor
http://community.rapbattles.com/showthread.php?t=133833

this was a close battle, i liked both of yalls openers and truth kilt it when he played off of mr.goodbars name, i think truth had the better metaphors tho, and also had better punches my vote goes to truth.

return the favor at my own battle here
http://community.rapbattles.com/showthread.php?t=133838