poetic justice vs mr.goodbar
 

house rules...
u spittin first..in 30 mins from now
wen u drop i get 30mins
d/q..if u outside that time

spit n gud luk

Poetry in motion...I spit 12 bars, didnt know the limit, enjoy and good luck

Poetic bout to get his whole-neck-slit from the apple to the throats pit/
You wish you were "Poetic Justice", so you could be fuckin on "Pac's" dick/
Poetic Justice, wanna bust this? what's that? Your edits-boring em?/
Thats because this is the battle arena, not the Poetry forum/click here bitch
Justice has been served, got his asskicked like a poetic skank/
Blasted your plastered casket underwater with no ceptic tank/
This Janet Jackson wannabe got stabbed in front of me through your scab to your scar/
Got you running in squared circles like you was your Avatar/
I'll split you apart like an unlit cigar like I'm making a joint/
Your six points under par, under my car like periods under exclamation points!/
Im Max Hardcore, Your my bitch gettin pissed & shit on with sick shit! You know you love it!/
You claim your hard but your soft like bisquit, now thats Poetic Justice/

ima cumin............................................

:bored: -- just kidding mang, just whenever you get it

yo
 

this a "goodbar"..coz ur first "punch" left u incappable...
dropin ya gay shit here..jus opened ya ass up..left u rapeable
ur sigs 2 big 4 ya..if ya brain woz chocolate it wouldnt fill an m&m
try again...if i try stand close enough to him i can hear the ocean
type of nigga that cut himself with a pen.....jus cos it say "bic"
only cat that would be happy wit cancer cos he can then claim to be "sick"
checked your sig...ya balls dropped..thats real great ya
so u had sex.....thats gud...now all u need is a partner
i finished wit this newb..smashin his teeth like obie trice....
....u need re-incarnatn now....
anyone who told u to be urself..cudnt hve given u worse advice

iight people Ive posted on like 6 of your battles and the favor hasn't been returned, take 2 minutes, read each MC then vote, dont kill this board with sleepers, gotta give to get know-wattta-mean - peace/love

yo..hit this up wit an honest vote goodbar.......
n i`ll hit up 1 of ur battles.aiight

http://community.rapbattles.com/showthread.php?t=133877

hit this up first though............
im 4-0 up...........hit it honestly........

http://community.rapbattles.com/showthread.php?t=132300

PUNCHLINES - POETIC
STRUCTURE - MR.G
FLOW - POETIC
METAZ - NEIDA
PERSONALS - ?

VOTE POETIC

DROP A FAIR VOTE ON THESE LINKS COS WE ALL HATE VOTING ON PPLZ BATTLES N NO GETTIN ANY VOTES ON ANY OTHA BATTLE BACK IN A FAIR EXPLAINED VOTE ON THESE LINKS

http://community.rapbattles.com/showthread.php?t=133370

http://community.rapbattles.com/sho...366#post1394366

yo this battle was aight
GoodBar what happen mang i saw the verse you dropped 'gainst DaTruth and you came hard I just didn't see ya this time your flow was shakey and structure off so it made it hard to get what you was rimin' I liked your line 'bout runnin in squared circles though.
Poetic your cancer line was sick mang but your flow was off slightly structure was aight your bic line was a little off soundin don't know why but still you came with a betta verse mostly based on flow and that.
Punches was aight for both and personals some was hittin some just wasn't but still
Vote Justice.

yo i vote poetic just because he did better than mr. douschbag lol or w/e his name is

Yo, please vote on these battles...
Me vs RV
Me vs Illiance
Me vs BostonLyricist

Mr.Goodbar took this with his creativity and wordplay, Poetic had some good punches and good verse structure but Mr.Goodbar just edged it

VOTE - MR GOODBAR

I dont know how yall coulda voted for Poetic. His verse was horrible. Nothin in there whatsoever that caught mah attention. Ocean and M&m dont rhyme and partner and "great ya" dont either. Mr. Goodbar had lines that acually rhymed together. Thats like the most important thing! If they dont rhyme then your just talking shit about them. Good bar had some tite bars like that exclamation point one. He had a structure I could follow pretty good too. I still dont know how you could have voted for Poetic. This battle was a landslide. Good bar took it.

Vote-Goodbar

Vote on it:
http://community.rapbattles.com/showthread.php?t=133759

great-ya
part-na

rhtmes...simple...just depends how u say it bitch
m n m
o-cean

same as......

both had good versis but Mr G took that battle, PJ came nice but i still think MR.G had a ting or two above him

N.