Ameen vs Poetic Justice
 

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i'll spit now......

you falling apart it's not my fault your an emotional CRIPPLE//
In the real world you couldn't make a promotional NICKEL//
get off this site thinkin your tight actually I'm being SERIOUS//
I'll hit you so hard with these punches you'll be left DELIRIUS//
I'ma give you 'Justice' your lyrics are all over the PLACE//
you need some luck well put a 4 leaf clover to ya FACE//
dawg u wrong for comin here but im RIGHT~4~LEARNIN
slashes-of-flames to ya face is the only STRIPES~U~EARNIN//
Your a liar I hate pre-writer's and biter's like your SELF//
but you can bite like a snake and still wouldn't effect my HEALTH//

ok
 

first off your verse was obviouslly pre-written....
wow 7 mins to post n not one punch hard-hittin...
"ameen" ur obviously fake like cheap gold.....
green wit envy...n style all about keyin-cold
u from liverpool..the football team i support..
u bottom of the league..so retire take up a new sport...
i cudve cum harder against this wack bitch..
aint no need cos he didnt even toss a pitch...
u like micheal jackson..so do the moon walk...
cos u goin backwards...nxt time give ya verse sum thought...

yo i aint going to vote on this and nor am i free posting.
its jus im after setting up a crew of jus uk heads and since you both english i was jus wondering if you interested....
both you pm me....

oh by the way... good battle to both you.

yo..sumone drop a vote on dis....return tha favour.................

http://community.rapbattles.com/showthread.php?t=133875

Ameen You started off wack as fuck yo but your last 4 bars kicked in nicely, nice hits, althought IM growing tired of the "prewritten" and "biter" lines that are plastered all over this site, thats just me though

Poetic Sorry dawg, I really wasn't feelin ya this battle. Ive seen you come alot nicer than this. Your flow was about the only thing that seemed legit to me

No disrespect v/Ameen

ameen your verse was alright, lacked originality and nultis but it was cool and the attempt at a punch was ok too, nothing particularily special though man.

Poetic your verse was alright too, after the first couple of lines i figured you'd rip him but you didn't have the hard punches either, your flow was cool but there wasn't much in it apart from the fake gold line.

V. ameen cos it seemed more like a battle verse an he gerneally came harder.

peace

aiyo, 2-0 to me....don't sleep on this peeps......

neither came overly hard....

Punches-Ameen (more consistant)
Personals-PJ...but terrible
Multi's-tie
Creativity-Ameen
Flow-PJ
Meta's-Ameen
Wordplay-Ameen
Enjoyment-Ameen
Vote-Ameen

Vote=Ameen

His punches were much better than PJ.PJ took this to easy and didn't really punches to throw at him.Ameen had good punches & flow.

VOTE ON DAMN BATTLES,I did take time to read this shit

ameen dawg good verse poetic good one 2 but emeen got u dawg he had abtter punches and flow u had some flow but to muchh flow and no punches
v/ameen

return tha favor since i dropped on urs

http://community.rapbattles.com/showthread.php?t=133833