freestyle feedback homies
 

if spit this lyrical shit//spritual shit//neva no wonday dis mite be a hit//
u dont no// wont say no// to my flow// comin out row// at this live show//
after i cud be in a studio//recordin a song for da radio//i deffinitly hav an impact// tht leads to distraction// follows on to satifaction// so read my caption//u ready action// u wanna beef im redy to clap summin// teachers say i lack in ability// ijus say dey pic on me//sya i hav no talent for hand-writing// n all im good at is fitein //perhaps we shud enlighten// these h8rz tht i do hav problems// u got a problem // sure i find it hard to write// but i try my best i cant help it if im shite//but wen im ballin i trick in mid height//

I like the opening few lines, not as good towards the end tho. keep it up :thumbup:

watup man u nu here init sup g-man